I'd say my minor nitpick so far as that you haven't really captured sour sweet nor sugar coats mannerisms quite properly. Sour sweet usually speaks with some rapid mood swings that come off as passive aggressive while sugar coat is always brutally honest and a total ball buster. I honestly feel like they're inter changeable with the dazzlings quite frankly.
Something tells me that these antics are going to get worse and worse, since this one seemed a bit more brutal than the last
Looks like another great Story.
And such a high frequency of new chapter.
You are on a good way to become my new favorite author.
Keep up your great work.
Dog-gone it!
I'd say my minor nitpick so far as that you haven't really captured sour sweet nor sugar coats mannerisms quite properly. Sour sweet usually speaks with some rapid mood swings that come off as passive aggressive while sugar coat is always brutally honest and a total ball buster. I honestly feel like they're inter changeable with the dazzlings quite frankly.