The sirens use their remaining magic to get revenge on the Rainbooms. They use it on human Twilight and she turns into Midnight Sparkle again. But she isn't evil per say, just studious and a little mad with power.
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If you skip the AN, a little something you should know: I lost data. I had no backup. I make up for it next time with a longer chapter, Midnight Sparkle finally making regular appearances and clop (if I can squeeze it in somehow).
6732304 I actually put it in the AN. Did it not work?
6732358 Um I actually didn't notice it.
6732363 It's there. Just easy to overlook. It's at the bottom with the name of the artist.
books were.
Dude....Seriously....Get a editor! It's very distracting!!!!!! Also you keep going back between Midnight and Twilight, you really need to fix that as well that gets distracting.
Your AN makes me appreciate how relaxed my workplace is that much more. I can do pretty much anything there, up to and including making levels for doom 2.
Also why does Rarity have Adagio's boots?
I could get that when Twilight discovered she turned back into Midnight, she was thinking in her mind, "Hahahahahaha! I should really thank those fools! I had completely forgotten how great it feels to be me! To understand Magic and possess sheer amounts of it!"
If you don't mind, I'd like to make a kid friendly version of this. I'll put in my own things of course and give you credit for inspiration.
6733174 That was on purpose. While Midnight sees herself as...well...Midnight, others still see her as Twilight at this point. I am working on the editor.
6735281 Go ahead and tell me when it is uploaded. I would love to read it.
6735830 It's just an interesting concept. The whole "my friends look at me and think I'm meek, puny Twilight but in actuality, I've transformed back into the great and powerful Midnight Sparkle disguised as part of my plot to understand all magic" thing, it is intoxicating.
6736062 Eeyup
Question: is Midnight wearing her glasses with her new look? Because the narration doesn't really say. And I'm not entirely sure how accurate the picture is. I mean, the glasses not being there may raise some questions.
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6739091 Hmm yes. I certainly need to work on the craziness. And thank you for unintentionally pointing out a flaw in my story. I forgot to bring this up, but Midnight isn't wearing any glasses.
What I can tell about her behavior is that she is holding back right now, still thinking it would be too soon to reveal herself. But since this story is written by me, it's going to happen sooner than she likes it.
6739217 I just meant that she's more clear-headed, knows exactly what she's doing, playing it smart rather than just doing things willy nilly. And I really enjoy how she's being portrayed here.
6739308 Thank you, I will keep that in mind.
Thanks for that picture. I've been thinking of what it would have been like it Twilight and Sunset had been in each other's place, and the picture helped me imagine that even better now.
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