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Mochas Dungeon
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Mochas Dungeon
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Very interesting story! I liked the concept as well!
Although you have to proofread, there are a lot of moments where errors are in plain view!
I'm actually quite amazed that this story doesn't have more views for it's well written and there is a lot of potential!
May I ask why there isn't any cover art? Didn't you find any that corresponded?
Because I'd be glad to help and find some for you! (I loooove doing that kind of stuff!) It would be a pleasure!
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I think CristalGalaxy meant errors as in typos or grammar (I didn't check for those yet, but I think that CristalGalaxy wouldn't say anything about errors otherwise). Those have nothing to do with expressing any character's uncertainty. Grammar should still be done in a right way and words should have typos to not break an immersion into a story. That's a golden rule of writing. :)
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Should be better now. My proofer is still offline, but I gave it a full run through.
Thanks for the advice!
(New content added/removed)
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Nice! Also, nice picture!
It has been done.
I have read it.
And enjoyed it.
And im someone that doesnt generally read clop, hurrdurr.
I still vote you for author of the year.
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Spread the word of my awesome words!
I'm sorry, how is this possibru?
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Math is power!
6616112 Yes it is!
6614948 it will be done. And you shall like it. Whether you like it or not.
Why so hiatus-ey?
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I have to work the chapters between other stories.
Soon.
Very soon.
:)
6964439 flutteryay
Not really my cup of tea, it was pretty interesting though.
I love This please UPDATE, this is very gooood... What if Pinkie gets pregnant
Nah thats a stretch, but update
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Hehehe, little hyper Fluttershy's?
I'm thinking if what to do next.
Inspiration will come, then so will they.
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Alright I'll be following, at least this is one story that updates
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My wife gave me the inspiration just now!
:)
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