All I wanted to do was enjoy myself for one night. But just one simple neighborhood Halloween party ruined that for me, kinda. Now I'm Sheogorath and in a new world. But hell, at least I get my own realm and pony worshipers to enjoy for eternity
6630220 I think I think that because it is so good at the moment and usually these displaced stories have really terrible moments that I don't like (that makes sense, right?)
Besides some minor grammar issues it's a good read. I think your portrayal of the Mad God is a bit off, as he's seen as more malevolent, but than again you did state his power was restricted to his own realm due to the elements of harmony. I'm guessing since that's the case he doesn't really have much to do and has no real means to utilize his powers to their full capabilities.
oh, what a surprise all 3 will receive....
Was that a reference to Kefka from Final Fantasy?
And poor BonBon...
Nice work, well done.
6628182 Maybe, sadly that was the only thing I could remember from that game.
6628191 It happens...
6628274 I don't know much about the series you've displaced. So I couldn't say
Wonder what Trixie is up too. Those two idiots are about to learn the hard way the mad god is very real.
Poor Bon Bon is going some personal problems because of where Lyra's loyalty lays.
6628447 Played about half the first one, but that was years ago. I don't own the games and played it whenever I was at a friends.
So, unless she decides to go before the bridge is complete, Trixie or Lyra will enter the Isles before Pinkie.
My initial prediction still stands, just replace pony with member of the Mane 6.
6628611 Yeah, I agree.
6628852 I'll take that into consideration, thanks.
I don't mean to be nasty or anything but everytime a new chapter is added i expect it to be bad! But everytime it just keeps getting better
6629575 Lol, what makes you think that? But I'm glad you like it
6630220 I think I think that because it is so good at the moment and usually these displaced stories have really terrible moments that I don't like (that makes sense, right?)
6630447 Lol, yeah in a way it does kinda make sense
Besides some minor grammar issues it's a good read. I think your portrayal of the Mad God is a bit off, as he's seen as more malevolent, but than again you did state his power was restricted to his own realm due to the elements of harmony. I'm guessing since that's the case he doesn't really have much to do and has no real means to utilize his powers to their full capabilities.
... yet.
6646163 Yeah, of course there is also the fact he isn't the real Sheogorath. But his malevolence will start later in the story anyway
6646247 Can't wait to read about it. Keep up the good work.
hm.hm.hm oh what are you planning you evil mare....
HEHEHEHEHEHAHAHAEHEH! I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE!!!!!!
is this story dead
6909830 No, I've just been too busy working on other things. I can write a chapter real quick, but it won't be posted today.
6909859 yay it not dead I can't wait for more or maybe I can
ugh... another dead story. You find them everywhere these days....
7056855 Hardly, I just work on one story at a time.
Can you do more please
This is awesome and CCCCHHHHEEEEESSSSSEEEEEE IS TASTY
Shame this seems dead
I'd bet money that Trixie is a "Dark Seducer".
Not really though.