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Cosmic Flare
New to it all but love it all hope to do something to give back you all have giving me.
Cosmic Flare
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There's a difference between "to" and "too".
I'm guessing you mean "strapped".
Is this supposed to be "being"?
I suspect this is supposed to be "while".
The word "try" should not be capitalized here.
Just based on your story description, I'm going to suggest you join a group called "Looking for Editors" and ask for help.
Umm, I feel like you need an editor. I can be your editor if you want, but you need one.
6564930 Ok thank you for the points to change and fix
But where is this that needs fixing
please put more of the sentence in so I can find it faster. Thank you for the new group to join it will help.
6564947 Ok I will be happy to have you as an editor. How do I get you setup as one?
6569921 Hmm... That's actually a good question. I'd love to be an editor, but I don't know how... But there is a group where you can look for editors, I think. They might actually tell you how to do it too.
6570029 Yea I will looking in to it have fun with other things I will get back you soon.