Do you plan it as a long story, or just as a big oneshot?

Your hottest mini-fic yet!

Will read when completed, but you get a favorite anyway.
~TOOWC

Ah, another Wubs story! Is it my birthday? BECAUSE IT SURE FEELS LIKE IT!!! WOO!!!

As always, authors here hate vagina. What did vagina ever do to you people?

6494171 Just a one-shot. Will be marked complete once the bonus chapter is done.

6495214 I don't hate vaginas, they're tougher than any man I know. Those things can take a pounding.

[Disclaimer: Contains seduction, cuddling, sensual massages, cum inflation, and a pent up futa princess. If none of these are your thing, turn back now.]

Welp, I'm going to to need a private corner to read this story.

Dude. ARE YOU MY FRIEND? XP

6495214 What did it do to me you ask? It eludes me . So tempting, yet always out of reach. However with dick, it is always there when you need it, like a good friend or a bottle of beer.

6496480 Muahahahha it did nothing to me :3 or did I do anything to it.

Damn it. I had this really long ass comment that started off saying that you had gained another spot in my "stuff" bookshelf, then went into all the ways that Rose is no longer alive due to the various injuries she undoubtedly sustained (regardless of any OP as fuck alicorn tier magic bs anyone tries to explain with) during her and Tia's intercourse, I.e. massive hemorraging of basically all the internal organs, severe spinal injuries, hip probably being broken in two, cracked and or broken ribs puncturing lungs, the stomach, womb, and uterus basically popping like balloons due to the sheer amount of fluid pumped into them. It would've been a closed casket for sure. Also Tia came off as a little "hypno-rapey" as well. not saying I didn't like it, by any means, no. Just realizing I just read the story of how Celestia brutally murders her newest female gaurd in centuries. Dafuq did I just read? P.s. I accidentally clicked to a different page on my phone while I was writing it.

6495214 Could you elaborate on that? You've given the criticism to other fics in the past. I'm wondering if you dislike how they're utterly stretched open or if it's how they seem to get less detail over the cocks' stimulus. There's also the possibility you're trolling, but eh, I'm curious.

6496437 So long as you bring the lotion.

6496559 You're right... I'll put that instead. Your version sounds much sexier.

6496624 Pretty straightforward: I'm incredibly sick of futa fics. I think it started becoming an issue for me when they actually surpassed non-futa clop fics in popularity. It's just... very bizarre to me. I dream of vaginas, in other words.

6497099 I find it'd be less of a problem if more of them weren't as outrageous as this one. I love futa, but this is just... Boring and unimaginative.

6496903 what kind of lotion and for what occasion...

6497434 Hey, I take offense to that! You left out repetitive. And I will have you know, good sir, that I only serve top quality drugs out of my secret toilet paper fort in the back of Home Depot. So when you call my business boring and unimaginative, you obviously have not tried my new product Pinkomine.

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What were we talking about? Oh, the story. Couldn't agree with you more!

6497099 I completely understand. Sorry if it displeased you, and I hope the rest of your day is amazing!

>no impregnation

What a shame.

I half expected Rose to start growing a cock after drink Celestia's cum, that would had been lovely if that happened.
Still awesome clopfic, keep up the good work.

6497929 I didn't see a condom.

6497841 An appreciation for futa is so common because of the demographic common to the media. Then there are those in it simply for the base subject matter rather than the substance and vice versa but with both ignoring the specifics of the content. Aka: In it for the sex and/or how well its done and could care less how it happens. All sorts out there. That is how I believe futa became so popular around here anyway.

Keep on keepin' on mentlegen.

6498361 ohhhhh

6497099 Ah, thank you for replying. Would a futa fic, by chance, be any more enjoyable to you if the herm in question used their female bits as much or more than their male bits? I have a friend who shares this same gripe, but I think yours is just the dislike of intersex fics in general.

6498514 This perfectly explains why it's so prevalent in the fandom and why it surpassed most normal clopfics popularity.

6498514 Well, gripe as you may, this wasn't meant for a big story. It's just a roleplaying session my friend and I had, put into g.docs, edited, spellchecked and posted. Your position has much basis, but it doesn't apply here. We simply used the fetishes we like and implemented it when it seemed appropriate.

This isn't the writings of a lazy author who is simply writing to get followers, but someone who wants to share his RP's with others. I really do it because of comments, the people. I love feedback, and I like to hear what people think. It gives me a sense of community, which is difficult for an autistic introvert like me. But it's comments like that, that assume, that make me feel like utter trash. Like this is all people see me as; A generic clop writer that continues to perpetuate the growing futanari fad. Like i'm the discount Call of Duty of fimfic. I'm not blaming you, really. I have just been a victim for my childhood. I bullied, and was punished for it. Eventually I stopped because I too was bullied, and I hated how it felt. I didn't want to make others feel like that anymore, like I felt.

But even when I stopped, I was always the scapegoat. People blamed me for everything. I defended myself from physical bullies, and I was always labeled the aggressor. By no means is this the fault of a random commenter on some story I posted to an internet site about talking pastel horses, but you have given me by far the worst possible case of deja vu. Sorry if I seem hostile, I don't mean to be. And sorry for the life story. Just wanted to bring my perspective onto the table.

Luna gonna be in it?

6499883
At this time, we don't think Luna will be in this one.
HOWEVER...
Vinyl_Wubs and I are working on a much larger scale story that does have a lot of Luna in it.

So hard it hurt.

6499935
THANK YOU SEMPAI'S

The buildup was a little bit rushed in my taste, but hey, can't expect an epic from a one-shot
Apart from that, however, it was an amazing read!

6499080 I wasn't griping. Cum Inflation is something I'm into, and sometimes you need futa to make it work with certain pairings.

6495283 Ba-dum-tis

6499956
*Looks around*
Okay, don't tell Vinyl I told you, but it's when I say it's a larger scale story, we I mean it. Years will pass within the story, but sshhhh

6502361
OK but why not just pm me that?

6502367 Because he's an idiot... my idiot.

6502635 kk

6502367
Because now he's gonna punish me

6502985 yay!!!!

..... This mare sounds like one of 3 things: Flash Sentry's Daughter, Flash Sentry's Mother, or a Rule 63 Flash Sentry... Sorry if she's not any of those, her color combo just sounds like she is.

Good read btw, have a like & fav. Can't wait for that bonus.

I loved it all.

the link picture history? pls!!!

6515244 Not safe for work. I established how to find it in the description.

Is this supposed to be marked as incomplete?

6537687 Read the author notes.

420 likes...

Why did it have to be 420?! It's so perfect! And now I've gotta ruin it! Fuck!

I'm sorry, weed blazers and meme kings...

This some good stuff. Tbh better than your later installations >.<

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Thanks??