Spike finds a mysterious gemstone while looking through the various rooms of Twilight's castle. [ABDL Themes]
This is very interesting, I'd love to see a sequel to this. The ending has really left me wondering whether or not Spike can escape his situation.
6424688 I agree, usually you say that you're finished whenever someone asks for a second chapter but this doesn't seemed finished yet. In fact there's quite a bit of material here for a chapter two. Please continue Scribe!
6425044 Well that might actually be hard to do, since this was a comission for someone else.
I'd like to see a sequel with the CMC.
Good writing aside, this feels unfinished. The non-ending leaves a hollow feel.
Nothing is resolved. There's not even a particular revelation it's ending on. It's alright to not do sequels but frankly this feels like half a story.
This is very interesting, I'd love to see a sequel to this. The ending has really left me wondering whether or not Spike can escape his situation.
6424688
I agree, usually you say that you're finished whenever someone asks for a second chapter but this doesn't seemed finished yet. In fact there's quite a bit of material here for a chapter two. Please continue Scribe!
6425044 Well that might actually be hard to do, since this was a comission for someone else.
I'd like to see a sequel with the CMC.
Good writing aside, this feels unfinished. The non-ending leaves a hollow feel.
Nothing is resolved. There's not even a particular revelation it's ending on. It's alright to not do sequels but frankly this feels like half a story.