Sincerity

After Shining Armor dies of old age, Twilight Sparkle must use her cunning to save Cadence from an unwanted marriage. Set in the same universe as Blasphemy.

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Iron Nebula

Iron Nebula #1 · Sep 12th, 2015 · · ·

This was hilarious. Comedy gold in the form of over-the-top silliness. Well done!

TwilightXLuna

TwilightXLuna #2 · Sep 12th, 2015 · · ·

I do not know what I read but it was funny great job

Seether00

Seether00 #3 · Sep 12th, 2015 · · ·

Quite funny. +1

Aotrs Commander

Aotrs Commander #4 · Sep 12th, 2015 · 1 · ·

Nice! Very nice.

Dame Knight-Commander-General Princess Priestess Pinkie Pie must have been piure WIN at her prime.

On an actually serious note, though, I think you hit the rarely-struck balance between having a few character still around for one reason and another, the others gone but never forgotten (and celebrated rather than mourned) and the new ones that time would have brought into Twilight's circle.

grumpyoldpony

grumpyoldpony #5 · Sep 12th, 2015 · 3 · ·

6417855 Thanks! When my girlfriend died, we rented out her favorite dance club and threw a party. :) Fics where where Twilight spends centuries mourning her friends just seem OOC to me.

Derpmind

Derpmind #6 · Sep 13th, 2015 · · ·

Quality comedy fic doubleplusgood, yes, but I have to say that the Garden of Equal Representation is super-fantabulous and I love it.

ColdGoldLazarus

ColdGoldLazarus #7 · Sep 14th, 2015 · · ·

Glorious!

Hobbestc

Hobbestc #8 · Sep 14th, 2015 · 1 · ·

Twilight bowed briefly and turned to Spike. “Do you require a second?”
“No,” said Spike, “I'm ready now.”

HA! I see what you did there. Unless you didn't mean to do it. In which case, bummer.

grumpyoldpony

grumpyoldpony #9 · Sep 15th, 2015 · 2 · ·

6424132 I wrote it, then realized what I'd written. It is my favorite accidental joke ever.

Swashbucklist

Swashbucklist #10 · Sep 16th, 2015 · · ·

6427867 Accidental jokes are the best.

The only thing that really annoys me here is that Spike's part in the story ended while he was unconscious on the battlefield. Wouldn't have hurt to stick him in the throne room just one a second, would it? Have Drill Bit bump into him on his way out?

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