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Pinkie Pie's Story

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You've seen Pinkie make the cake, take the cake, and even shake the cake, but have you ever seen her eat the cake?

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rosebug

rosebug #1 · Sep 3rd, 2015 · · ·

Nice story! Its a different take on Pinkie's origin story and it was really interesting.

That said I think you could have fleshed out the parts between her saying she wanted to bring fame and fortune to the rock farm and her being hospitalized it happened really quickly. I get that since it is Pinkie making a video she may leave out a few details, but it still needs a little something extra there. You also have a few spelling errors, but nothing too big

Overall, I really enjoyed your story! I like how you mentioned that her problems didn't just disappear altogether, they just changed. It was a nice touch.

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