Fluttershy vanishes as a mysterious tree appears in her yard, surrounded by timberwolves. After a tense week of waiting, the tree's biggest fruit, an absolutely enormous peach is finally ready to fall. What's inside will change Equestria forever.
It's alive!!! I was actually scrolling through my folder of old clop a few days agao and thought "Huh, it's been a while since that one updated. I wonder if it's still going?"
so flutter butter and rainbow crash were in prison for chucking a dead body of big mac and fluttershy into a wood chipper?
wow, i haven't laughed that well for a while. so are these guys made from flesh and bone or some kind of plant matter? because errr that coulda been messy for the woodchipper guy
It's all plant matter. They actually stopped them from doing it or they'd have ruined the woodchipper - you aren't supposed to put green wood in there and that's what their bones are mostly made of, while the flesh bits are more like fruit. They'll have to dry them out before they can be properly mulched. They'll figure out a quicker way sooner or later.
Hitting up Youtube for an "IT'S ALIIIIIVE!" clip, I found this instead... I need to see this movie.
As an aside: Does anyone know who added my story to the group "Unsafe, Insane, and Consensual"? I'm not allowed to view it and it's driving me nuts to have it sitting there on my story page but I can't see what else is in there.
Any news on this series? I've loved it so far and would love to see it continued. After all, we're only a few down and so many more to go for conversion~
Hit a bit of a roadbump on the next chapter. Story sort of veered off in a bit of an unexpected direction and it took me a bit to figure out how to write it. But I'm working on it again now. Also have another story I may start posting- first chapter's done already.
7720448 Awesome! You're a talented writer so I'm quite excited to see more from you. Sorry you had such troubles with the chapter, but that sometimes happens of course.
Going to be honest, not one to read sex scenes, but there is enough story going on that this is still a solid read. A few errors in it (sorry, was reading it on my tablet at the time and didn't have anywhere to jot them down) but nothing that pulled me out of the story.
A+ for your first story, and if you ever need help/advice, don't hesitate to message me (or jump on discord , you have a few fans there).
Update: past that roadblock, got another page, now some conflict on how the next scene should go. Hoping my muse will give up the next bit soon, the moody bitch.
This is so ridiculously weird I almost want to read it. At the same time, I kind of don't.
you messed up the italics tag here.
I have to admit, this is one of the very few clop stories where the actual plot interests me almost as much as the clop. Good job!
Though it looks like you've had a formatting fail. at least, I'm pretty sure 80% of the chapter shouldn't be italicized
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Rghslhglshglks fixed.
Since you fixed the italics I thought I might mention this instead.
It's alive!!! I was actually scrolling through my folder of old clop a few days agao and thought "Huh, it's been a while since that one updated. I wonder if it's still going?"
so flutter butter and rainbow crash were in prison for chucking a dead body of big mac and fluttershy into a wood chipper?
wow, i haven't laughed that well for a while.
so are these guys made from flesh and bone or some kind of plant matter? because errr that coulda been messy for the woodchipper guy
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Fixed now.
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It's all plant matter. They actually stopped them from doing it or they'd have ruined the woodchipper - you aren't supposed to put green wood in there and that's what their bones are mostly made of, while the flesh bits are more like fruit. They'll have to dry them out before they can be properly mulched. They'll figure out a quicker way sooner or later.
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Hitting up Youtube for an "IT'S ALIIIIIVE!" clip, I found this instead... I need to see this movie.
As an aside: Does anyone know who added my story to the group "Unsafe, Insane, and Consensual"? I'm not allowed to view it and it's driving me nuts to have it sitting there on my story page but I can't see what else is in there.
anymore
Any news on this series? I've loved it so far and would love to see it continued. After all, we're only a few down and so many more to go for conversion~
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Hit a bit of a roadbump on the next chapter. Story sort of veered off in a bit of an unexpected direction and it took me a bit to figure out how to write it. But I'm working on it again now. Also have another story I may start posting- first chapter's done already.
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Awesome! You're a talented writer so I'm quite excited to see more from you. Sorry you had such troubles with the chapter, but that sometimes happens of course.
Going to be honest, not one to read sex scenes, but there is enough story going on that this is still a solid read. A few errors in it (sorry, was reading it on my tablet at the time and didn't have anywhere to jot them down) but nothing that pulled me out of the story.
A+ for your first story, and if you ever need help/advice, don't hesitate to message me (or jump on discord , you have a few fans there).
just read this for the first time and I have to say, it's fantastic! I really hope it keeps getting updated. Thanks for an awesome story!
i liked the concept XD just waiting for it to be completed so i can start reading (or at least updated)
Is it odd that just looking at the title i expect a musical interlude to pop up at some point?
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Check the author's note in chapter 2.
Update: past that roadblock, got another page, now some conflict on how the next scene should go. Hoping my muse will give up the next bit soon, the moody bitch.
Anymore?
will you at least tell us if this story is on hiatus?? Or is it DEAD??
I Sincerely hope you will continue to write this rousing story.
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TLDR is internet speak. The real world version is "in short"