Scootaloo tried to get up but fell down because rain was falling from the sky and her hooves were wet. The clouds were very musty and seemed to be angry with her, but she didn’t know why. Maybe it was because she was the orphan.
She didn’t like to be called the orphan because it make her remember that she had many no parents. It was just yesterday that she remembered the day that she was taken away by the governments. Her parents were brutally traffic ticketed after they were ran over by a the bigmac.
She cry very much because she was not there when it happened because she was watching the new hit TV show Rick and Morty in Equestria which was supposed to be on the season finale. It was a very happy ending until she knew her parents were very dead.
Scootaloo closed her grimy eyes and wiped away the sad hoping to get out of her little box. The box was very brown and made of the cardboard it was made out of.
“Why me, I am so very saddened right now because my parents are dead and I am the orphan.” Just then she saw Rainbow Dash fly above and Scootaloo thought “Wow, what a good thing she is becuase I want her to be me mum.”
“What are you doing out here?” say a little voice from the behind. “It was very hard to find you out in this musty weather but I found you!”
Scootaloo turn round and saw that Twilight was there and had tears in her eyes and they were jumping out onto the muddy ground. “I was so very worried that no pony would find me out here because i am the orphan.”
“Oh no you are not the orphan you are my orphan.” Twilight put her hooves out and nodded her head. “Come give me the big huge you used to give to your parents.”
Scootaloo was very happy and the sun came out like lightning, but it was very loud and they both had to cover there ears because of the thunder.
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They were now at the home of the treehouse and it was very warm next to the hot fire. “What are we going to do now?” asked Scootaloo with little look in Twilight’s eyes.
“I wanted you to eat here and sleep here and breather all your air here and play games here.” Twilight had a huge smile on her face.
Suddenly Rainbow Dash came in the house and said “Hello I am here to eat dinner with you now.”
Twilight pushed Scootaloo aside and jumped up to run to Rainbow Dash. “Oh wow you are here and I love you!”
Rainbow Dash pushed her aside and said, “Why is Scootaloo here?”
Scootaloo got up and said, “Rainbow Dash! I really want to talk to you about how I really want to tell you that I am a orphan!”
Rainbow Dash melted with joy and ran over to Scootaloo. With a little look in both their eye, they were hugging but Twilight didn’t look happy at all from the sidelines.
You want to be happy with her? I am the one who helped you! You can’t do this to me....
“Twilight?” Rainbow Dash asked as she cocked her head to the side, “What’s up?”
Twilight suddenly snapped out of her crazed planning long enough to notice that both Rainbow and Scootaloo were staring at her like she was some type of alien. “Oh!” Twilight rubbed the back of her neck whilst letting out a soft giggle, “I was just thinking, you know? Hahaha!”
Awkwardness filled the room for a short period of time before Scootaloo simply broke the silence. “Hey, Rainbow Dash?” she asked, “Can you stay here with Twilight for a bit? I think it would be really cool to have you both here!”
Rainbow Dash momentarily felt her muscles tense as her mind was flooded by thoughts. I can’t stay here, I have to go to the big race!
“Rainbow Dash?” Scootaloo spoke up with a bit of worry injected into her voice, “What’s wrong?”
“Nothing!” Rainbow suddenly blurted, giving Scootaloo the biggest smile she could muster. “I was just thinking that Twilight wouldn’t want me staying here, cuz I eat all her food and all!” Rainbow Dash’s gaze snapped to Twilight. “Right, Twilight?”
She shrugged, “I don’t mind if you stay for a few days.”
“YES!” Scootaloo almost screamed as she jumped into the air. Her little wings flapped furiously whilst she was airborne, causing her to float gently back to the wooden floor of the library like a feather.
After landing, Scootaloo ran up to Rainbow and grabbed one of her front legs. “Can you see my room!?” she shot off. “I have tons of posters of you and it would be really, really cool if told me which ones were your favorite so I c-”
“Scootaloo…?” Twilight said softly as the room around her seemingly fell into a bout of verbal chaos.
“Then we can go out tomorrow to get a few things ‘cuz I really want you to pick out all the stuff I should have for my room and-”
“Scootaloo!” Twilight yelled as she stomped her hoof.
The room fell into bliss silence as Scootaloo swiveled her head around. Her eyes met with Twilight’s and a sheepish grin grew on her face. “Sorry Twilight…” Scootaloo lowered her head in shame as she dismount Rainbow’s leg.
Twilight smiled, “It’s fine… You’re excited, I get it.” Moving over to Scootaloo, Twilight put her hoof under Scootaloo’s chin and lifted her head. “But why don’t we let Rainbow settle in first?”
“I think that’s a good idea.” Rainbow spoke up. “We’ll be able to all that stuff you wanted to do tomorrow.”
The once forgotten smile reformed itself on Scootaloo’s face. “Really?”
“Of course!”
As Scootaloo began to hop in front of her, Twilight saw the signs of another “fangirl” moment coming. “Wait a minute!” Twilight spoke up, “Why don’t you go brush your teeth? It’s time for bed.”
Scootaloo froze and looked up at Twilight. “But Twilight!” With little to no effort, her lips began to quiver and her eyes became glossy.
“No buts, get in there and brush your teeth."
talk shit and you get blocked
7280629
how do you know what clouds are? your not no cloud expert your just a troll
7280629 Clouds can be musty! Do your homework
7280636 In my headcanon, there were corpses raining down. It adds to the story
7280636
why dont yo just back off? you dont know how to right like me
7280641
but hes not a troll liek you. so he can stay
please stop harassing me. im a struggling author
we have many likes. thank you for likeing my fans
has potential, but i think a bit of editing is needed, for a little sprucing. good idea though, may need to expand on why twilight is so focused on being the one to help scootaloo and angry that she wants rainbow instead.
maybe spin it as a humorous thing?
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listen here. you have no clue where this story is going so i think you should stop hating and go away
no trolls here pls
Pretty good read don't let people tell you how to describe anything it's your story not theirs.
I have to go for a bit so please keep giving it upvotes until i get back!
10/10 like MLD with orphans
Yet another masterpiece from a true artist like yourself. Well done.
Oi, you cheeky m8. I hope many jimmies are rustled.
Given a up thumb. ANYONE who gives out downthumbs is doing so because they want a reaction. There is no reason to bomb someone else or their story. If you don't like it, just don't comment, but to give a 'down thumb' just to hurt the stories reputation, is NOT the pony way of life.
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I mean, generally a dislike is used to show that someone has done something wrong, which is not a bad thing. Dislikes are useful.
Unless it's on a pure work of art like this story. Then it's wrong.
Story by Windlife?
My body is soooo ready.
This is definitely a cute idea, but it could use, as pointed out already, a lot more editing. There are points where the words just don't make sense, and it really breaks immersion to the story. Please don't take offense to this, but if you are interested, there's a whole group where you can request help. Until then, I wish you luck from the haters.
~Harmony
Sorry, but the artist (who you did not give credit to) has specifically requested in the description of their picture that it not be used for any fanfictions, as shown here: http://mrardilla.deviantart.com/art/No-More-Tears-Squirt-451393752
Why everyone hates this guy?
7280906 Or you can just not be a dick.
-The artist.
7280921 I don't care about you.
7280928 How cute.
How will people know if they don't like it if they don't read it?
i feel dumber having read this soooo
Don't mind me. I'm just here for the fish
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This comment section went sexual really quickly.
7280906 Loath as I am to involve myself in this silliness., what they CAN do is PM a moderator, inform them of the disclaimer, and have it removed.
Might even get Windlife a disciplinary infraction of some kind, too.
Speaking of which, 7280882 PMs work better man. You know that.
7280944
It got really gay for some reason.
Maybe it's my fault.
7280949 You're saying it like its a bad thing.
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It tends to bring in the kind of crowd that takes comments seriously though. That can be a problem when you're as stylishly sarcastic as someone like me.
7280928 Lol please, you're calling us talentless hacks? Conker, the owner of the picture in question, is a fantastic artist, and has drawn many pictures that have blown me, and countless others, away. As for me, I've published nearly half a million words and have amassed quite a significant following because of it. And what do you have to show to back up your petty insults?
Nothing.
7280974
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7280974
Aren't you supposed to be above this? Besides, follower count only means that people like your stuff, not that it's good. On this website, those are two drastically different things.
7280991
This is a website centered around one of the biggest, most obnoxious fandoms in recent history. No one here is above pointless arguments and dick-measuring contests. Especially me.
7280991
Where specifically did you see me mention any of that in my comment that you replied to?
7280906 That may be so that the characters are owned by Hasbro, but little did you know that Hasbro made it so artists are allowed to draw fan art. So there really isn't any threat of having their work claimed by the company.
Now what CAN be claimed is a copied original picture who's owner stated that no one can use it in any way, shape, or form. It can also be claimed for not giving any credit to the owner of the art piece.
Please check your facts before you embarrass yourself with your "facts" (Opinions).
7280996
That part right there, where you use your followers as a point in your argument that Rebecca's opinion doesn't matter.
7281000 You're accusing me of me saying that because people follow me that I think I'm a good writer. I did not say that.
7281005
In response to Rebecca's assertion that you are a "talentless hack", you pointed out that you've "published nearly half a million words and have amassed quite a significant following because of it." You used two things to prove that you aren't a "talentless hack"—word count and following. I don't see why you're trying to argue this when I am quoting your exact words back to you.
7280932
At last, we have been reunited yet again. Our star crossed love shall be written by great poets, who hopefully don't write on this site.
What did I just read?
7281011 Lol so you're saying that my followers are all idiots? That's a fantastic argument. And if I'm writing "utter trash", then do explain why I have this many followers? Your insults hold little merit.