• Member Since 4th Dec, 2011
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thatguyfromkfc


I'm British, I write sad-fics, play Minecraft and watch ponies.

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Partly inspired by the finale of House M.D. and the end of Click. When faced with death what choice would you make? Death or life? Would anyone miss you? This is the choice Twilight Sparkle had to make.

Just a quick story I wrote. I'll make a sequel and it'll be longer.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 4 )

I feel this has such potential. The downfall of this story is that it is disappointingly short - however extremely well written. I would have loved to see more dialogue between The Pegasus of Death and Twilight. I'm still not sure of his real intentions. Dd he tell Twilight to run, because he knew if she teleported, she would live, and we wanted her to die?

A story with great potential that just needed padding out a bit more - overall, still very good. :twilightsmile:

I liked this a lot. I look forward to the sequel :pinkiehappy:
And House is (was) the best show ever, except MLP

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