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Yay! Update!
This was really well done. With the normal backing him, this hypnosis session worked perfectly. There is obviously still some flaws with implementation later, but for achieving a possible solution for the team, it was really affective.
As for Spitfire joining the team at the end, this will be really interesting. On the one hand, Pascal helped her team let off some steam and helped them develop a possible strategy to help stop them getting that pent up in the future, as well as personally helping Spitfire get some much needed relaxation and play a fantasy she really loves.
On the other hand, she is a part of the military and would have to look out for the interests of the nation. She clearly has some dislike for Celestia's methods, judging by her rant last chapter, and she likes Pascal for his help and even some outright affection, but would she be able to reconcile that with her duty to Equestria?
More then that, if she does take issue, how will Pascal respond? He has been very careful with Moondancer so far and gone out of his way to let her keep her personal freedom and thoughts and well as help her understand his need to effect changes to save himself. Could he hold that same approach with an active military pony, who is faster, stronger and very capable of stopping him if he doesn't directly use his abilities with force.?
All questions for next chapter, I can't wait.
Minor correction: "Breathe. In, and out. Let your breathe carry away your worries."
'breathe' is the verb. 'breath' is the noun, so the second of those needs to be fixed just slightly.^_^
Hopefully Moondancer and Trixie were taking detailed mental notes of Pascals actions when working the Wonderbolts over, so they can abuse the Normal by association also.
Also nice to see Nightlight and Velvet moving onto the Mane Attraction and reason for the spell, given the old Dragon Lord isnt around to Boulder his claim on pony breeder toys.
So, what next for Pascal, given if he is collecting a six pack, and Celestia will be the last one, its either one more if picking up Luna, or two more, of other specific perversion guidance desires and requirements?
Poor Spike still hasnt got his Zebra inflatable.
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So one of the most popular "hypnosis" stories on the site finally gets a hypnosis chapter. Amazingly well done as always, and probably worth the wait.
It's still intriguing to see how you make and keep
Anonwhat's-his-namePascalHypnodude a normal person, in a story about over-endowed talking pony people with more cheesecake than Sugarcube Corner on one of Pinkie's 'inspired' days and copious amounts of mind control. I also love how you turned Spitfire into an interesting andadorabledeep character after having her keep up the one-dimensional, no-nonsense boss-mare act for almost two chapters. Looking forward to seeing more of her just like I was looking forward to more of Moondancer after her first chapter.Great chapter. I wonder how Twilight will react once she see's her parents like this.
Amazing chapter.^^
Hmm... another way he could use Normal to strain its capacity is possibly actually changing someone's personality. He can't change their cutie mark and what it represents... but how much could he change of a person as long as that core aspect remains? Though, with how moral he is, I can only see him doing such if he discovered a criminal that is doing something bad to someone, or something like that.
You know, at this point, I'm just curious how much further this story will go... and how many more chapters there will be until the meeting with Celestia.
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assuming they don't get stuffed so full i have to split them again like this wonderbolts section, which i'm going to try to avoid, there should only be two non-celestia chapters left
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Well, that's good to know.
As much as I'm enjoying the zaniness and sex, I'm getting eager for a plot explanation.
Is Pascal going to end up with anyone by the end of all this? I have to know.
I'm not into the clop of this at all despite that being its goal.
I'm just here for the, "Hmm, how badly can this fuck up and still be OK." reason.
.... Again I Ask .... .... .... .... HOW DID I GET HERE?!
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Might be dead by the end of this if it's for the safety of the nation and pony species. Tune in next time to find out!
um, is there going to be any more actual hypnosis part, and how many chapter do ya think are left, just wondering
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no and maybe four or five more
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ok
Mmf~ Gosh this story is awesome.
NO YOU FOOL! You are the Traveling Sex APPROVERS!
BEHOLD! The undeniable might of the TSA!
... hehehe.
As an amateur, self-taught hypnotist, I enjoyed this immensely.
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA Perfect
That chapter was mind blowingly awesome /epic now I just can't wait to see what's going to happen next.and now that they've added another member to all this it just keeps getting better.
Aww, sheeeet! Spitfire's in on this!
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....👍
These ponies must be made of something else...
It's funny... This is starting to feel like a goddamn RPG feels... It's clear we're nearing the end of the story, because the Player Character feels genuinely powerful, more and more in control of the plot, and he's clearing the challenges more and more thoroughly.
At the start, he was just a bumbling idiot who kinda got away with shit... then he had his fire stolen (a bit), and was forced to truly mature into his power. Now, it really feels like he's got a good handle on achieving that, as the final confrontation inevitably inches ever closer, with a finality and permanence to it like nothing ever before...
It's like he's standing in front of the last dungeon, to get the last piece of the Orb of Normality, before he can finally earn entrance to square off and dominate the final boss...
I really enjoy how much "Mass Effect"-y this all feels, complete with proper 'companion dialogue milking' between missions... :D
Okay, so I wasn't exactly right -
A new member has joined the party.
Seems there's still quite a bit of spunk in this story left... Wow. It's not often I'm pleasantly suprised with such a development by a game, let alone a novel (because let's not kid ourselves - this "story" would snugly fit a 600-page softcover not out of place in a book store...).This shit has all the humour of a fanfic, with all the development and breadth of a novel, while keeping pacing and structure of a good RPG. Color me impressed.
Also, Power Party FTW (with Moondancer clearly being Twilight in all but name).
Have I mentioned I was supposed to be asleep 12 hours ago?