Lee and Rainbow are back, and more bro-y then ever! But now is not the time for funny business! Two enemies have returned, and its up to Dash and Lee to save the day!
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I'M FIRST! HAHAHAH! FOR ONCE I AM FIRST! HAHAHAH...
I decided to submit this early, cause why not? First time writing a sequel, legit, let's see how this ends
Also, who likes my new avatar? Don't I look smashing?
Yes while I am working on Fallout: Equestria - The Crazy Ones and its prelude (Yes that is its name cause I'm getting tired) among other things, I decided to post this one earlier because I love you guys and I want you to enjoy something new for once. I do intend on finishing this, don't worry about that, I fucking Pinkie Promise it.
Cross My Heart, Hope To Fly, Stick a Cupcake In My Eye.
"FOOOOOOOREVVVER"
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So, enjoy, read, review, upvote downvote I don't cuuuuuur.
As always, any help, criticism and pointing out typos is appreciated. Just... add a comment on if you enjoyed the story or not, commenting about just typos doesn't tell if you hated it or not D'x
Toodles~
6386172 heehehehe, so glad you enjoyed what I got so far man, legit!
makes me one happy writer. Thanks again, and I will keep it up!
6386246 Me too, it'll be posted sometime either tomorrow or later today, depending on if I get plenty of reviews 8D
6386430 Wheeeee~ Awesome sauce.
Lee x Dash foreva~
Going by the current track record, I think this will be good, then!
Also, .
Tracking to see where you'll go with this.
Meanwhile, have a thum-
Oh, ok then.
I gave you a thumb anyway.
6387873
Nice to see you again, hehehe.
I'm so glad you like the story so far XD hehehe.
Thanks man! I hope you'll enjoy what chapters I'll be posting next.
heeheehee
Thank you darling, that's very nice of you~
Lyra is best side pony.
Aww fuuuuck. Man, another good story. I'll keep reading it later on, your comedic stylings really click with me. On an unrelated note I noticed you have a Starbomb song on your main FIMfiction page, would you happen to be a fellow lovely from the Game Grumps crowd?
'Reading with derped face'
'derp face intensifies' What?
Love these stories by the way
good story bro
Lots of fore shadowing, this has.
Look, I really do enjoy this story, but this part really bugs me. The fact is that lots of bats can see; in fact, the majority of them can. If you look at them they'll look back at you.
With their eyes.
That they use to see things with.
You may have gotten confused since blind bats are a myth and people know bats use echolocation to hunt their prey, but most of them use eyes as well. Twilight should know this, as a bookworm; besides, in the season four episode Bats!, the bats clearly looked at the characters and were able to see them.
Sorry if this comes off as pestering or something like that, but this has been bugging me for a while. I like the rest of the story, though. It's just that one part.