Huh. So, as soon as the Zaku showed up everything goes center aligned. Who hit it and forgot? I ask because it bugs me on the level that the story isn't a bunch of titles, so it needs to be left aligned, maybe tabbed over. Also, I kept having to stop and reread Spartan as the spartan during the fight.
“HEY, SUN ASS BE GLAD I'M NOT BEING TELEPORTED OR I WOULD SHOVE A GRADONS COCK UP YOUR ASS! WITH ITS SIZE I MIGHT NEED TO USE TWO!” I laugh flipping the bird as I teleport off.
Well it was fun though. XD
Previous chapter was good, this was too focused on another person from a fic I don't read, 2/10
Huh. So, as soon as the Zaku showed up everything goes center aligned. Who hit it and forgot? I ask because it bugs me on the level that the story isn't a bunch of titles, so it needs to be left aligned, maybe tabbed over. Also, I kept having to stop and reread Spartan as the spartan during the fight.
this... it's beautiful
Next chapter WILL have Forerunner/Precursor bullshit, making sure its factual so itll take abit
Just got done reading everything you wrote so far and I got to say very entertaining So far so you got my Fav and a up vote
6425306 Yayyy, it hard writing so many AI's as there quirky nature soon take all the love.
Bucking hilarious!
And really like the WH40K references!