Zecora, Trixie, and Succubus has just gone through the greatest moment of their lives. Marriage to Prince Blueblood. Now they're on their honeymoon and three wives are to share one husband.
Why all the downvotes? I've seen much, much worse written with far less skill.
Welp, probably the choice of characters. I'd suggest you ignore the votes for the most part unless they're accompanied by some sort of useful criticism.
As it is, the ship in this fic is a rather interesting one. Personally, I love it to pieces whenever the male of such a harem takes a dominant part in what's going on, but understand that's not everyone's taste. Still, it would be very enjoyable to see that happen here!
Whatever else, you would do well to explain who Succubus is and how she got to know the other characters.
6416011 I already knew this would happen, so I am not that surprised. So I will simply write and finish the story. This is to give Blueblood the positive outlook no one is willing to try. Even though personally I don't like him myself.
Why all the downvotes? I've seen much, much worse written with far less skill.
Welp, probably the choice of characters. I'd suggest you ignore the votes for the most part unless they're accompanied by some sort of useful criticism.
As it is, the ship in this fic is a rather interesting one. Personally, I love it to pieces whenever the male of such a harem takes a dominant part in what's going on, but understand that's not everyone's taste. Still, it would be very enjoyable to see that happen here!
Whatever else, you would do well to explain who Succubus is and how she got to know the other characters.
I'm thinking the downvotes are because of prince blueballs.
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That's one part of the plan. But this is a story commission, so it's not my call.
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I already knew this would happen, so I am not that surprised. So I will simply write and finish the story. This is to give Blueblood the positive outlook no one is willing to try. Even though personally I don't like him myself.
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The explaining Succubus' back story, or having Prince Blueblood play the dominant among these four?
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little of both
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Joy!
I have to say, I'm not a fan of impossibly large breast. If like the interesting pairing, but I'm not interested in reading any more. Sorry.
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It is not a problem, thank you for at least giving it a shot