Royal Canterlot Asylum and Medical; a respectable mental health institute built to help ponies from all walks of life, no matter their circumstance. Nurse Redheart has taken on a new member of staff who has volunteered for the job, he's passed all the training needs and now begins his first day.
Her concern is unfortunately who she had to assign him to. A criminally insane patient that has needed a new Primary Nurse for a good while. It's her hope that he will manage to do better than his predecessors with this mad-mare.
Screwloose.
[Undergoing rewrite]
Chapters (1)
Damn if this doesn't feel like a renamed Psycho Pass episode 1 with moments from later episodes like the one about the guitarist being denied her request for new strings denied once again. It's also got that whole reconstructed intro for some characters and the way they explained the psycho levels. And the whole way Red Heart, Stallion and Silver Mist talk. The ideologies just seem so damn similar.
Aside from those musing, nice chapter. Looking forward to where the story goes in chapter 2.
UPDATE: Damn, Screw Loose is basically the white-haired dude. Damn, this IS Psycho Pass but with ponies in a psycho ward. Nice. xD
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Heh. The guitar strings were a reference to Psycho Pass, aye. Everything else was actually unintentional, does it really feel like Psycho Pass with that stuff?
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Strange, the only Psycho Pass element was the 'guitar strings' moment. Everything else is heavily inspired by Broad-moor Hospital.
Maybe it set the feel of the story for you as the reference was so early on?
I've once again made changes, so I have repub'd the story. Hope it's up to snuff.