Big Macintosh catches Apple Bloom in a private act and 'punishes' her. The consequences aren't anything like what she would have expected them to be.
There's at least for or five times where you wrote, "trust" instead of "thrust". You may want to fix that.
I understand you dislike incest, and I liked the story... It just had more potential, y'know? Anyways, is just my two cents.
There's at least for or five times where you wrote, "trust" instead of "thrust". You may want to fix that.
I understand you dislike incest, and I liked the story... It just had more potential, y'know? Anyways, is just my two cents.