* Italics signify that it is being spoken in the species’ native language, or in the universal language of the Covenant, and that this is the closest possible translation.
The Elite Ultra was sitting in the back of the Phantom along with two other of his kind, Sangheili to be precise. Alongside them were three orange Unggoy and two Kig-Yar snipers. The Ultra looked at the assortment around him, and then to his closer brothers. Both were in Spec Ops armor, and he was equipped with the charcoal black Spec Ops version of the Ultra armor. The one closest to him, a crimson red, was a Stealth Minor. The other, colored a dark watery blue, a Stealth Major. What confused the Ultra about his team's colors was that the Stealth colors were different from the everyday Major or Minor colors. The difference could be anything from a small shading difference to complete opposites in the armor color itself.
The Ultra sat back and relaxed somewhat. He had spent the entirety of his deployment on the human planet on his feet, always moving, either on the run or hunting down his prey. He managed to take out a few of their soldiers and civilians, even steal some primitive TacPads from two of the soldiers they killed…but then the humans in armor came. The Demons.
They came from the sky in their horribly loud ‘falcons,’ as they call them. There were six Demons in total, though two of them stayed on one of the vehicles as they took off. One of his comrades, a young and newly promoted Stealth Minor, ran off to distract them from the group. And it worked…somewhat. One of the Demons, obviously seeing him move despite his cloak, gave chase and hunted him down, ending his life with five well placed shots to the head. But the young Minor did distract them enough for the group to camouflage themselves and slink away from a nearby ‘warthog’ they had destroyed earlier in the day. Later during that deployment on the planet ‘Reach,’ the Ultra had faced down a Demon while his own comrades dealt with a small squad of marines and two or three ODSTs.
They were finally being recalled to a Corvette called Glory Upon Salvation floating above the planet's outer atmosphere. It strangely stopped communicating to the ships around it as it went for more fuel from one of the larger ships. The large Elite closed his eyes, enjoying the small amount of relief from his legs.
*“Ultra.” The large, armored Sangheili heard the deep throaty voice of another Elite coming from the front of the Phantom.
*“Yes, Major?” The Ultra turned his head to the cockpit, where another Major was flying.
*“You may want to come look at this.”
The armored beast sighed as he picked himself up and shook his head from side to side, loosening his sore jaws a little to wake himself up. He made his way to the front of the Phantom and looked at the 360 degree circle of holographic screens. The screens zoomed in on the side of the Corvette, and they saw a Demon being tossed out of one of the landing bays by an unknown assailant. *Whatever problem there was, there is no more. Honor and glory to you! the Ultra thought as he watched the Demon fall from the hologram’s view. The Elite Ultra looked to the pilot, and the Major manipulated the controls to zoom out.
The Phantom flew off to the side of the bay doors and the cameras zoomed in again... onto another Demon, a very large one with a very large weapon. There with it was one of the human ‘Pelicans.’ There was a large contraption on the back of the vehicle and… the Ultra's blood froze. The Demon was pressing buttons on the large object. It suddenly occurred to the Ultra that this Demon tossed out the other and is staying back to die. Honorable, but pointless. Any second now, Zealots would burst through the doors and kill it...
Only none arrived.
*”Major... what is that, and what is it doing?”
*”It looks to be a human slip-space engine, as to what he is doing, I do not know.”
*”Turn around.”
*”Ultra?”
*”Circle around, do not go in and engage and do not leave the battle.”
*”But what about honor and-”
*”I will gladly slay you here for you to keep your honor, but blindly running in without information? There is no honor in dying without a fight.”
The Major contemplated his choices and looked down sadly. His fingers moved over the controls and the view moved left as the Phantom turned around. There was only a small quake within the Phantom that signified it racing away at top speed. *I may have lost honor by running... but I will take the blame, and not my comrades. The Ultra walked out of the cockpit and noticed his two remaining brothers looking back at him. They both nodded, knowing what they would have to do if he didn't do it himself. The Ultra looked down at his wrists and the hilt of his energy sword. He took the cool hilt in his large hand and ignited it with a loud sizzle. It was hungry for blood. His blood, the enemies’ blood, it was the essence of life. The essence of Honor. All blood was the same to the blade. The Unggoy looked away, as did the pair of Kig-Yar, knowing what was going to happen next.
He slowly brought the blade up, above his wrist. *I must scar my dishonor and shame into my skin. He was about to cut when the entire craft violently pitched forward, causing him to lose his balance and hit the ceiling of the Phantom with his helmeted head hard enough to knock him out.
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The purple unicorn had finally gotten the telescope up the steep hill in Sweet Apple Acres. She sighed heavily as she planted it into the ground before aiming it in no particular direction. She looked to her five friends and her number one assistant, Spike.
“Okay girls, finally. Now we can watch the meteor shower in full detail! I wonder what Princess Luna has planned this time? She usually has some big finale when it’s over.” The purple unicorn, Twilight Sparkle, realized she was rambling and decided to not talk for a while.
“I’m sure it’s going to be spectacular, dear!” replied Rarity, the white unicorn.
“Without a doubt! It’ll be twice as cool as last year!” Rainbow Dash said, hovering about two feet above the ground, pumping her right hoof into the air. She laid back and landed softly on the ground staring up into the starlit sky, waiting for the awesome.
The others just stayed silent and looked to the sky, waiting for the streaks of light to shoot across the heavens. And they were rewarded with just that. There were bright streaks of light shooting across the sky. Some fast, others slow enough to get a good look at on the telescope. The shower went on for two hours, before it finally stopped, pausing. Then, there was a sudden rush of meteors shooting, thousands of them, some big and others small. They all went different speeds, and formed a single word in the sky. ‘Friends.’ The six mares and dragon smiled, knowing why she put that in the sky.
Suddenly, a huge hole erupted in the middle of the word, pitch black but with a bluish hue surrounding the outside of it. It grew bigger and bigger, sending extremely large purple fireballs careening through the sky. There was one fireball so big, Twilight was sure it was bigger than Canterlot itself! It seemed to emit sparks here and there, but then the fire disappeared, leaving a large and dark object looming ominously in the sky. The only thing getting within 20,000 feet of the surface was a lone, blue flame. It was moving at an alarming rate, falling almost straight down from the sky.
The seven watched it closely as it continued to fall…and fall…and fall…until they saw it head into the Everfree forest, where there was a dull purplish/blue light and a faint, echoing boom.
Thanks to re-edit to Shanenator!
I want moooooooooooor
641285 added in some music
A Sangheili in Equestria? My interest is peaked, rarely do we see this in a halo crossover without at least a human being involved.
I'll keep a tab on you. I tried adding stories to read later but it doesn't work
Also...GEMME MORE!
*watching*
Hm...to short to say if it is good but story line for now is going to be good. I'm not familiar with Halo universe but i think i can deal with this story one way or another ;) This is almost like... putting Predator into MLP.
I'nul Alnah
Pronounced: Ih-nul Al-nah
How's that for a name?
MOAR
Oooh, I like it. Most Halo crossovers mostly involve a Spartan or a ODST being transported somewhere, but Elites are nearly never done.
Interesting take on an almost-cliché concept. Apart from a few grammatical hiccups, I like everything so far. You've earned yourself a fave.
644115 In the Sangheili culture names carry great importance if you will remember the Arbiter is always called the Arbiter and the Ship master is called the Ship master, they are refereed to by rank not name. Of all the humans the Spartans are the only ones who deserve a name Demon
nok'nethal
Hmm. I just started writing a fic with Elites heading to Equestria, but they were to be accompanied by Humans as I was setting it post-civil war. Interesting to see how the Covenant react as a whole. I hope you keep at least one Unggoy alive. Yayap was the best character in the first Halo book. A Kig-Yar would be cool too, to get the whole variety thing. Anyway, best of luck, favouriting and liking.
644719 I was planing on all but two elites dying, but I like your concept more. I'll definetly keep one of each alive!
644379 what kind of hiccups? I really want to improve but I just see myself stuc
644354 that's why I did it!
This is good! People are getting more creative with the creatures in Equestria. No longer will humans be the only sentient species in Ponyville! In fact, just yesterday I read a story where the U-3 from Resident Evil 4 was sent to Equestria. New doors are opening, and new adventures await!!!
644781
Well, here's a few:
* Generally, Special Operations are abbreviated to Spec Ops or SpecOps, never Spec OPs. Capitalizing two letters in the second word indicates it's a plural of an acronym, not an abbreviation.
* If you use an ellipsis, you don't need to capitalize the next line. example: "from two of the soldiers they killed... Then the humans in armor came" should be "from two of the soldiers they killed... and then the humans in armor came", or even ["i]from two of the soldiers they killed. Then the humans in armor came."
* Apostrophes aren't needed everywhere. example: " and two or three ODST’s" should be " and two or three ODSTs". Also, remember that "it's" is a contraction of "it is", not "the [x] belonging to it."
* Also, make sure to only capitalize after a new sentence. example: "Okay girls, Finally." should be "Okay girls, finally."
* About when saying someone starts saying something... well, that can vary. If the sentence is first, followed by the speaker, use comma to end the sentence, and don't capitalize the next word unless it's a name. If the speaker is first, and then the sentence, use an apostrophe to connect the two. example: "She usually has some big finale when it’s over.” The purple unicorn" should be "She usually has some big finale when it’s over,” the purple unicorn"
Anyway, that's just a few. If you need another pre-reader, I'll be happy to help. I'd be sad to see an otherwise-great story to be shamed by grammar nazis such as myself.
645455 I will fix those when I get home, and I would love if you were a prereader
Love it man. You don't usually see this kind of thing, most of the time there is at least 1 human but this will be interesting.
645273 mah boi, times are changing, for the better.
But I have only one question...
How many points do I recieve?
645979 haha thank you I read so many halo fanfics, and it saddened me that only two or three have Elites in them, so I said no to humans :boulderconfictedemotions: and here is your Elte warrior in Equestrian Hahaa
645989 All the points, as well as a complementary pair of socks.
DO continue this story. I am quite interested in the next chapter.
645974
Sure...
i am intrigued. will like and fav.
I need so mutch more dude, this is freakin awsome
644580
OH! Thanks! I get it now!
As long as this doesn't turn into a battlefield expanding the war (which from a purely cannon standpoint would make no sense, which most crossovers ignore) I will stick around. This shows promise with good text and standing out from the masses with something other than a human making first contact.
651273 There won'y be any wars hitting Equestria any time soon, I guarantee it I shall try my hardest to make this an awesome fanfic :D
I'm hoping jorge survived?
I'm such an idiot sometimes.
I've never played HALO before (sad existense, I know.), so I don't get any of this. I will try my best, though, for the sake of reading this awesome story.
Stupid mother not getting me an XBOX.
RE: Edited chapter - ahhhh, so much smoother. Looking forward to the next update.
Liked and Faved purely because You took a different approach to Halo Crossovers.... (Yes You deserve it, so many stupid MC/N6 Fics)
Now to Read
An EiE story? Well, that's unique.*reads ch.1* Fave'd.
651273 From canon, there is no reason for them to fight the ponies. They fought the humans because the humans were 'defiling sacred planets and Forerunner installations."
Yes, there was indeed a big surprise.
one thing that i didnt like, the everlasting "arrives in the everfree forest" part. besides that it was good
BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Everytime I read a Halo crossover they almost always appear in a meteor shower. Don't misunderstand, I'm not complaining just making an observation.
3378001 Why are you so true?
This calls for some Shipwreck http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=eDOFzu-6MD4#
Awesome, man! This is some good stuff! (my first comment, too) 😐
They all (went different) speeds, and formed a single word in the (sky. ‘Friends.’) The six mares and dragon smiled, knowing why (she put that in) the sky. Casual readers may not remember that the word ‘she’ refers to Princess Luna.
They all went at different speeds, and formed a single word in the sky, ‘Friends.’ The six mares and dragon smiled, knowing why Princess Luna put that word in the sky. After all, friends create friendship and friendship is the most powerful magic there is.