Ehehehe

can you do one where he knocks up rarity?

*Sigh*

Faves.

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FUCKING HOT! (and well written.)

Very hot!

I thought his canon name was Magnum though. At least that's what it is on the CCG cards and the Gameloft game

Nice chapter, but there's some things you may want to edit.

Sweetie mane, lavender and cream pink, was nothing like the rich purple of her mother or the soil brown of her father.

That should be "Sweetie's"

Come on, Daddy! I’m not a little filly anymore! You don’t have to act like this, and besides...” she paused, and hondo looked over his shoulder just long enough to see Sweetie bite her lip through the steam, looking quite bashful.

That should be capitalized.

Mare, now...

"Mares"

It splattered around Sweetie’s gaped anus, just blow her dock and on either side of her rim.

And "below".

>Urethral teasing

YES

Mmhmm. Is gud. Keep up the good work.

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