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Twilight and the gang find a vault under the castle in canterlot with the hundreds of thousands of mirrors but all of them have cracks on them... but on of them is not broken... the mirror number 63... what will happen when the girl decide to see whats inside the mirror?

and you should read this if you ship canon x r63 couples
if you dont know who is who

twilight=dusk
RD=RB
fluttershy=Butterscotch
rarity=elusive
pinkie=berry
AJ=AJ XD

cover image by zoeproductions from devianart

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 25 )

i love R63
y blitz lose he my 2nd fav then again u the author and u cant please everyone just wondering

OMG
I love yhis story very much !!!
And i love the same shippings too :)

'this' sorry a mistake in writing :\

I love this story !!!

r63lover if you wanna see pictures of this ship visit NothingCute's gallery on Deviantart.com :)

* Twilight Sparkle = Dusk Shine
Rainbow Dash = Rainbow Blitz
Fluttershy = Butterscotch
Rarity = Elusive
Pinkie Pie = Bubble Berry
Applejack = AJ

6167555 what do you mean I cant pleasure everyone?

6167688 YAY I am so happy that people like my story ^^

6167712 thanks for the advice ^^

6169822 well i mean that in everything that exist theres always gonna be a group or that one person that wont be pleased just sayin

6170053 but are you one of those people?

6170075 i was just wondering y blitz lost that's he is my 2nd fav in r63

SORRY I WASNT UPLOADING CHAPTERS LATELY I AM BUSY BUT I WILL BE UPLOADING WHEN I HAVE TIME

pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee carry on i love this story its my fav

6774287 omg thank you so much I will don't worry I have 2 chapters almost ready ^^

A few pointers, one, the first chapter seemed rushed, I suggest a "rewrite" to make it less rushed and Awkward. Two you don't absolutely need to put authors POV just the characters would do so that we know if its the cannon or r63. That's really about it. Otherwise good story nice flow, excluding chapter one but I say it out of experience.

6778449 np I can't wait I bet the two chapters will be awesome :rainbowdetermined2:

6781516 yes I thought that it a little rushed I just had some that even more rushed so I don't know but I will try and rewrite the first chapter to make it longer... I actually didn't use an idea which I forgot about I will add it

6782521 I posted one already ^^

If it helps read on a cross and arrow for some ideas.

RD=RB's we have the meats! :trollestia:

Arnt they supposed to be equally fast?...

um i'm guessing it's cancled huh? it has been a while:applecry:

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