Solar Flare is just a regular Pegasus, he has loved his best friend's sister for years, but he hasn't been able to tell her how he really feels. He dreams about her constantly. He struggles with his feelings every day.
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You should put OC tag.
It's a pretty rushed story to be honest.
You're going too fast and you really aren't going into detail about what is going on and how the characters are feeling. You're just telling us that they are either sitting down or just looking at each other. You aren't going into a good amount of detail about what the characters look like or how they are feeling when they do certain actions.
If you want to add in a margin that skips scenes then use the horizontal line, it's much more better.
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619863
Again the same guy ,same publicity ,but new account
619767
I agree.
You know, I understand if you want to write about IRL issues you're having, but could you at least make it a bit more subtle?
Was the cover image taken with a camera?
619767 thank you for the advise, I will remember that, I am not by any means a good writer and I have almostno clue what you are saying, but, I'll keep that in mind
619987 yes, its from a long time ago when I only had a camera, although, I don't think that really matters a lot.
620904
So you made an OC on a computer and then took a photo of the screen?
620956 yes
Ever heard of the button 'Print screen'?
621033 did have a printer at the time
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621062 *didn't
621175
' part of it.
I knew what you meant to say, but that didn't change the whole '
Do you know what 'print screen' does?
621687 Let me guess, it prints what is on the screen.
622758 No, it takes a screencap, which you can then paste into an image editor and save...so using a camera to take pictures of a computer screen seems kinda odd.