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I take it you enjoyed this story?

I find Anon to be a bit TOO willing to go along with this. No person in their right mind would agree to this without at least getting into some sort of debate. At least give him a name (I mean, Anon, really? Try Lee; there are a million Lees.) and a personality.

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Have you read any of fan fictions before? They are often this silly.

Granted, your advice is good for a more serious story. But yeah, my Anons tend to be have lego brick personalities quite often.

6059033 That depends on the next chapter my friend!

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Well, what did you like about this chapter?

6059093 Ridicules, thats what grabbed my attention. I like the chapter.

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Nowadays, even Legos can have a personality. Case and point: The Lego Movie.

And last... but not least they got these big, beautiful, enchanting......

Eyes?

.......butts

Oooooohhh.....silly me

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Yes, butts.

It was those butts that made me fall in love with ponies. XD

6059210 We all did my friend

and of course a massive, beautiful, bootylicious fat pony butt that was an ass man’s dream come true.

Slowly unzipping my pants

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Was there anything else you liked of the story?

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Sadly,there was no Zoidberg.

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I can't have him in every story.

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My crotch will cease all diplomatic relations.
I declare war.

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Also,you get a favorite

Continue the trilogy.

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If I don't (I suddenly die or something) can you get others to make their own version?

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Thank you!

Did you find the story funny?

I think this is the first story that is not one shot coming from you?

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I have a few that aren't a one shot.

Did you enjoy this chapter?

6059675 Yeah pretty much, it make me laugh how blunt it is

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I feel appreciated receiving a comment from you. I love your stories.

Hopefully, I can still keep the next chapter as good as the first chapter. If not better.

6059495 maybe. I like to help out. From all your other earlist stories (like bender adopts rainbow dash) they seem to be cancelled. Maybe this story can be your first true trilogy!

the fuck....

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Not sure if ponies... or if actually ponies...

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I'm sorry about abandoning them. I'm kinda a lazy writer.

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What was so 'the fuck...' about it?

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Eh?

Did you like the story?

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did you read your story?

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Yes...

It is kinda 'the fuck' I guess.

6061839 no worry i started following you way after those stories.

6061839 Making Futurama reference. Thought with your profile pic you'd catch the ball.

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Ah yes, that meme brings back memories.

I miss Futurama.

I can't say one way or another at this point, as nothing really happened.

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I just wanted to see if it would get a positive reception.

Knowing my writing skills...

What the fuck lol. Tracking this thing.

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Oh. Its a Bendy Story. Should have known.

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It's me, Bendy!

heh, the first impression when I read the name....
:P

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Did even read the story? Or did you judge the story simply because it's written by me, Bendy?

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No, no, no. Not that, I meant the title of the story...

"Twilight puts you on ice"
The news lately have been all about problems with ice.... So... Yeah, I haven't read the story yet. But I will soon..

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Oh...

Well, I hope you enjoy the story.

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Yeah I will ^^

This pleases me.

so good

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May I ask how?

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You're welcome.

6078533 The idea of this is just so interesting

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Could you write a second chapter? Maybe Twilight grows to Celestia-like proportions the next time Anon sees her, and she's...matured ever further? And then...we know what comes next. Right?

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I have written... some stuff already. Please, bear with me.

I like your idea. I could do an alternate universe non canon chapter to what you suggest. Better yet, you could write your version of this story. If you're not up for it ask someone else to it for you.

Also I originally planned... spoiler....
For Anon to wake up 1000 years later like from Futurama. Twilight makes him immortal and world is very Futurama like.

6134020 Should have known. Also...may I ask you try to stop being repetitive? For example...

Twilight suddenly lunged forward to wrap her hooves around you into a tight embrace. "I will miss you my love," she said softly with tears in her eyes.
"I’ll miss you too my love," you said in a low voice with manly tears in your eyes.

That. Don't repeat the same line twice. (If you want, I could proofread for you.)

Also...that spoiler idea sounds...real cool. I hope you go ahead with that!

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Thanks for the advice... but you must know I'm not a professional author, I write silly stories about sapient cartoon small horses for fun.

And I often write stories as intentionally bad and stupid.

Thanks for the offer as a proofreader, but I'm afraid I must decline.