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Man, you really are getting every few days now, aren't you.
Great job mate.
Well... um... huh.
Aye, there innae much can be said 'ere. Good battles, though, Lad.
6825289 What? Was it the thing with Cresselia, or was it the unexpected mental breakdown?
well, that cant end well for anyone...yet.
6825318 Little of both, I guess. Sometimes an author comes up with a chapter that just leaves me speechless. This is one of those chapters.
6825318 KO awesome chapter and are we going to see the beginning of Nightmare Moon rising and banish to the moon.
First thing, Zinnia parents were terrible and her ending up in the porn industry is proof enough. But i hope that nobody is actually from Zinnias part about her being a porn actress, because how would you feel as a father or mother discovering that your son or daughther is a 'pornstar'?
And to end saying that a porn actor is not the same that being a prostitute is like saying that that ketchup is not the same as tomatoe.
6830036 There is one big difference between porn and prostitution. Porn is legal everywhere in the US and prostitution isn't.
6830052 well, in both you get paid for having sex or selling your body. Where is the difference?
On one hand, Vash just got a serious crush from Cresselia, on the other, finally got a showing of the Angel Arm. I don't know how to feel about this last part.
Getting a little hard to root for Peter, his disdain for not killing murderers/rapists/mind-controllers is becoming all the more irksome with each new evil he refuses to end. I do hope he learns better.
6854937 Kinky
6889864 just shit my pants T.T
Am I the only one who hoped for Freddy to appear seeing the title?
I have no words.
7672855 He still thinks he's human.
7574710 Well, if it makes you feel better, Zinnia is gone forever.
... ... Right. OK. We had a good story going, could have gone a lot of interesting places, and it was decently written. At this point it's a clusterfuck of writing other people's stories in a way that seems like it stemmed from an ongoing "Wouldn't it be cool if..." conversation. Case and point, hack out everything about sex, and directly related to someone elses story, and you'd be left with almost nothing for the past several chapters.
I feel like I'm reading a set of cleaned up roleplaying logs, frankly.
In the end, I think most of my criticism comes down to the same criticism in 80% of displaced stories I've read: Write your own damn story. If you want to write together, write a collaboration, but pick one to write at a time.