7549633 KO awesome chapter, totally worth the wait and Rainbow Dash almost becoming like Vegeta maybe he's rubbing off on her. Hope Mira and Towa don't try to do anything to destroy our heroes.
"Where did that whelp get all that power from?" asked Vegeta. "Maybe he got it from all the training he does, so he can protect others. Maybe ya should try it." said AJ. Vegeta rolls his eyes at AJ. "When I want advise from a woman, I'll find a strong one." said Vegeta. Vegeta rolls his eyes at AJ. "When I want advise for a woman, I'll find a strong one." said Vegeta. AJ, and RD look at him angrily and were about ready to blast him into next Tuesday.
This one for example?
Now, I believe there is at least one more, maybe two places where it happens again. I skimmed through the chapter once more but wasn't able to find them and I don't have time to read the whole thing carefully once more. Maybe some other readers can point out what I missed?
Thanks... Now I can't get the image of Vegeta and RD dating out of my head... something that would seriously damage the timeline... So... if that does happen, that means they fail to correct the timeline and they would have to redo their mission, just like in the game. Or will this be different? Also, while on the topic, will there be any missions that our heroines (and Spike) will have to redo? And where is Trunks in all this? Doesn't he usually give you advise during the campaign or at the very least say some stuff? *Looks through some notes* Never mind. The girls would need scouters for him to contact them.
Also, I'd like to point something out. While Twilight uses the ability to sense ki, it is an ability exclusive to earthlings, those who've been on earth long enough or had special training. While I realize the girls could have had that special training, I'd just like to point that out.
7552620 Alright. That's understandable that you don't wish for the to repeat things, but I still think there should be at least one mission they fail and other time agents are sent to resolve it in their place while they use the time to train instead.
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7549633 KO awesome chapter, totally worth the wait and Rainbow Dash almost becoming like Vegeta maybe he's rubbing off on her. Hope Mira and Towa don't try to do anything to destroy our heroes.
Repeating sentences, repeating sentences everywhere.
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7550345 Where? I didn't see any
7550059 Thanks
7550491 KO can't wait to see Twilight and Rainbow Dash become Super Saiyans and protect time and space of the DBZ universe along with their friends.
7551014 Chances are that Twilight and maybe RD will turn Super Saiyan in the next Chapter or the one after, possibly.
So did spike just use Cooler's transformation?
7551169 It was my Co-writer's Idea/what he wrote and I didn't Imagine it as Cooler's transformation so maybe.
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This one for example?
Now, I believe there is at least one more, maybe two places where it happens again. I skimmed through the chapter once more but wasn't able to find them and I don't have time to read the whole thing carefully once more. Maybe some other readers can point out what I missed?
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*shivers*
Thanks... Now I can't get the image of Vegeta and RD dating out of my head... something that would seriously damage the timeline... So... if that does happen, that means they fail to correct the timeline and they would have to redo their mission, just like in the game. Or will this be different? Also, while on the topic, will there be any missions that our heroines (and Spike) will have to redo? And where is Trunks in all this? Doesn't he usually give you advise during the campaign or at the very least say some stuff? *Looks through some notes* Never mind. The girls would need scouters for him to contact them.
Also, I'd like to point something out. While Twilight uses the ability to sense ki, it is an ability exclusive to earthlings, those who've been on earth long enough or had special training. While I realize the girls could have had that special training, I'd just like to point that out.
7552485 thanks for Pointing that out
7552493 I Don't know, I rather not have them repeat things.
7552620 Alright. That's understandable that you don't wish for the to repeat things, but I still think there should be at least one mission they fail and other time agents are sent to resolve it in their place while they use the time to train instead.
7553516 Eeeh... they have time to train inbetween Missions and I'm not real Fond of that idea.
7553881 Thanks