Sees spoiler. "Double penetration". Laughs way too hard.
"It is like sex but if there were two penises" ~ IGN

That was good, no grammar mistakes, makes me very happy, my only suggestion to make this better is diction, not saying it's bad but diction is the icing on the cake and I feel like it would make me score this as a ten out of ten but I will give it a nine, it's one the better stories on here.

Spike should double penetrate the rest of them.

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I was having a lot of trouble with that. I don't have much experience writing straight clop, and there are only so many words for "vagina" that don't sound silly.

True this is a clop, what was I thinking?

Story sounded good til the spoiler got to rimming and felching.

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I don't think you're one of my regulars.

Whaaat? Either the tags lied, or I somehow missed the rimming and feltching. Still a good story, but it'd be far better with them. Great work with the buildup and grammar. That really impressed me!

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I took out the rimming, and I was just about to change the description accordingly. The felching is still there, though; it counts with vaginas, too, FYI.

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There. I added a chapter without the felching. I really should have thought about who my target audience was.

I would like to see a sequel of this. You earned this
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Awesome.

Soooo… Hawt…