Shining is pretty mobile in his sleep to have mounted and fucked a pillow. Probably would have worked better if he had a wet dream, or mention him having a history of walking or fuckin in his sleep.
You know Velvet, according to other fanfics, Cadence is down for incest.
There's another fanfic where Cadence paints/dyes herself to be Twilight Sparkle's colors, and has Shining call her Twilight, as he fucks her. Fic ends with Shining fucking the real Twilight, while Cadence watches from the bushes rubbing one out.
Found a minor thing you may want to edit.
Also, does Luna pretending to be Velvet in a the dream and having sex without him knowing who she really was count as rape?
5962024 you can't rape the willing
5962024 I don't think dreams can be rape. Hell, he even asked her to turn back into Velvet, so he was very willing.
I think Luna is the only pony you can be with in your dreams to be considered cheating. Mind you, Cadence might be okay with this, but who knows?
Damn, that dream was hot stuff. Shining's slow decent into sexy insanity is quite pleasing.
5968390 I agree
What the deuce Shining
Shining is pretty mobile in his sleep to have mounted and fucked a pillow.
Probably would have worked better if he had a wet dream, or mention him having a history of walking or fuckin in his sleep.
You know Velvet, according to other fanfics, Cadence is down for incest.
There's another fanfic where Cadence paints/dyes herself to be Twilight Sparkle's colors, and has Shining call her Twilight, as he fucks her.
Fic ends with Shining fucking the real Twilight, while Cadence watches from the bushes rubbing one out.
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You have the name of that fic?