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Draconaquest


And now it's time for one last bow, like all your other selves. Eleven's hour is over now. The clock is striking twelve's.

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This story is a sequel to Doctor Whooves: When Universes Collide


The holidays at Canterlot High are always lovely. Bells ring, children sing, and old friends reunite. Sunset and her friends are in good cheers when the Doctor returns for a visit. However, he discovers a crack in time leading to Equestria. Even when he closes it, the crack returns, and a swarm if Changelings comes out of it. With the TARDIS sent off who knows where, the Doctor is stuck between a rock and a hard place, as he must protect all of Canterlot High's students from the Changeling Invasion.

'Alternate Universe' tag for slight differences in the timeline.

Chapters (14)
Comments ( 46 )

Off to a great start!

"Well, I'll tell you one thing: the students at Canterlot High are a lot nicer and accepting than the students at Crystal prep."

prep should be Prep.

This chapter was great as well! I really like how you've portrayed the Doctor.

"What was that four?"

For.

since she doesn't have on yet

One.

"Who's pajamas are these?"

Whose.

Also, I noticed that you tend to leave the "the" in "the Doctor" uncapitalized after a quote. It should go like this.

"blah blah blah." The Doctor said.

Now I'm remembering Donna and her grandfather and now I'm sad.

Dayum. That was a hell of a chapter.

No corrections this time, but... Satin? Don't you mean Satan?

Unfortunately, this is where I must stop. Real life calls. I shall finish this over the weekend.

Oh boy, Flash is in trouble :rainbowlaugh: Also, I heard pony Doctor's voice from Slice of Life when reading Time Turner's lines :rainbowhuh:

Do you seriously not know that "Hooves" is spelled without a W? :facehoof::ajbemused::unsuresweetie:

6775306 It's a play on 'Doctor Who.'
Google it.

Well done, Draconaquest, as always. Very well done. I look forward to the next one. :twilightsmile:

6780304 Thank you!
The next one will be a sequel to the previous one.

6780361 Either way, still looking forward to it!

6780392 Yes, it will still be good.
I hope.

Dream monsters! Changeling dream monsters!

Poor Doctor, upstaged by Celestia's teachings.

very good, in the future you can make a thirteenth doctor (peter capaldi) and this doctor, fanfic

6795579 Well, this is actually the tenth doctor, shortly before the End of Time special.
I have several 11th Doctor stories planned, them some 12th Doctor ones.

The Doctor was great in this chapter.

Your prediction better come true, Quest.

But, they were too slow, and the creature excited the doors

*exited

Uh-Oh. So begins the invasion.

Hm, Turner send familiar. I wonder where you got the inspiration for him from:derpytongue2:

In any case, this chapter was great.

6858321 Yeah, I really wanted to put some references in this story, particularly the Soul's Savior.
I referenced some other things, but TSS reference was my favorite.
And I was able to put this little reference as a major plot point in a later story.

I'm glad you're enjoying the story!

Dun dun dunnnn!

"Oh, shut up!" the Doctor commanded. Flash obliged.

I lol'd.

Poor Doctor. Always having to say goodbye to those he cares about.

Well, I'm predicting that he makes it out of this, but there still was a very well written scene.

Quite a standoff. Has elements of Sycorax and the climax of Doomsday.

Save the day, Twi!

Dammit, Twi! When I said "save the day", I didn't mean to pull a Rory!

... Well,here's hoping she's also got Rory's incredible luck when it comes to living.

Looks like I was right. Twilight is indeed Rory.

Brilliant story. Sorry it took me so fucking long to read it, though.

6859927 Thanks!
I tampered with this scene a bit to get it right, and I'll find you liked it!

6859969 Oh, it's not an issue. Time can be difficult to come by.

I'm really glad you enjoyed this, and I hope you'll read the next one when our comes out!
Thanks for reading!

Holy mother of God's mother's mother. You made an actual TITLE SEQUENCE?! And this is my first time reading a story as a member of FIMfiction! You just earned a follower!

The title kind of sounds like the Doctor Who Episode: The Christmas Invasion.

7268317 Well, this is a Christmas story, so... I figured parody the title.

I liked the legend of zelda majoras mask referance

"You've meet a terrable fate, haven't you?"

Huh lemme guess this is the eqg doctor not the doctor

The uinverse is cracked. The Pandora will open. Silence will fall!

Nice usage of the prophecy of pandorica. Or better known as the question hidden in plane sight. Doctor who? DOCTOR WHO? DOCTOR WHO?!

Technically it kinda reminds me of the silence

The silence is actually a religious cult run by freaky aliens that an erase you from exsistance.

Han dies in ep 7 and at the hands of his own son no less

Time turner is actually one of the nicknames of the doctor who parody in mlp fim, doctor whooves.

sci twi died. WHY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

very good. so the next one will have the sirens, huh?

MUST. HAVE SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!

Twilight followed quietly, and Sunset close behind her. "Oh, I have a bad feeling about this."

Nice Star Wars reference 😎

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