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Frozen Quill


I'm just here to take in tales of grand adventure, love and romance. Then perhaps spin a few of my own.

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all she could do was stare into

Just capitalize the all. :pinkiehappy: Squee!

6469101 Done! I do hope you enjoyed the chapter on the whole! :twilightsmile:

'Why am I doing this? what compels this body of mine to move with such... Enthusiasm'

Just a capital W and a period at Enthusiasm. :pinkiehappy:

Overall, a nice chapter! I liked it. :twilightsmile:

6706474 Fixed! I hope you look forward to the next eventual chapter... This one is taking a while. :fluttershysad:

I know, I hold my liquor very well. You of all ponies should know that even by know, AJ.

Should it be now?

6816465 Found and fixed, thank you! :pinkiehappy:

Alright!!! Some Vinyl and Kiara action!!! :pinkiehappy: Even though it wasn't romantic at all, but there was a lot of plot and Kiara is covered around a towel in the nude at Vinyl's house! :rainbowlaugh:

Now we have the meaning of the 'Chained Luna cycle' and it's interesting to read. Why in the flying F**k are you readers disliking this story?! It's an original story about OC's with major and minor characters and if you can't handle it then don't freaking put you input into it!

6879017 I found the chapter cute myself, I didn't want to rush any aspect of the Vinyl and Kiara chapter. :twilightsmile:


6894141 Yes, now the title comes into play. Thank you for your constructive view. :pinkiehappy:

Why does this story have so many dislikes? I mean, it can't be that bad, right? ...Right?

7801386 I'd like to think so but I guess it's down to personal taste. All I can do is carry on for those who wish to see it to the end like I do. :twilightsmile:

I hope that Garrick gets a better role to support Yuuki with his smarts. Maybe a TNT explosion? :3

Ryota put up a great fight, but he lost. I hope he get's stronger to defeat Despair's elite general knight legion or Dolor. lol

Love the Kiara and Vinyl shipping is very cute. Also, meeting adjourned! You get a boot to the head. XD

7820919 Maybe. Alchemy gives a lot of opportunities for certain things.

7820937 You'll have to wait and see but it promises to be good. :pinkiehappy:

7820940 Some people might not like the development of that one but I assure you I have a reason for its speed. So didn't think about that when writing it but would be so funny. :rainbowlaugh:

The part when Pinkie Pie fires a fricken message to Binary in a cloud got me. :rainbowlaugh:

It has been a long tine since I read this from the original, and I must say it has improved so much from grammar, story plot and characters.

7858325 I hope you continue to enjoy the rewrite. :moustache:

6894141
Bad dialogue and stale cliches?

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Your opinion is noted for future reference. :moustache:

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