• Member Since 27th Nov, 2014
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Ferhog


Writer, Artist, and Connoisseur of the Yuri and Mecha genres.

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Night Glider didn't want anything to do with her destiny or her cutie mark. In an attempt to escape from it all, she goes north to find what she really wants.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 13 )
Ri2

…She's a NINJA? That's awesome. Why run away from that? Ninjas are cool.

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Well I intend on writing two more chapters that should hopefully have good explanations.

Next to the bad was a counter

Think you meant bed

from the mountains and nursed her back to health.

Think you meant me

Well done. A bit surprised to see this story, hadn't expected you to write with the intetion of a single chapter story again (especially after that story). Nonetheless I would agree its not a complete story and can't wait for more.

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Hey, just because I didn't like one single chapter story I wrote, it doesn't I should dislike all single chapter stories.

Replace the word single chapter story with [insert race here] and wrote with met and you have some excellent words of wisdom. I'm smart like that.

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yey :yay:

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Im fine with the view count that I have, I just feel down when my chapters get a lack of feedback. You're the first person who isn't a personal friend of mine to comment on this chapter. I thank you for that.

I don't suppose you'll post a comment on every cahpter you read?

so what happen after she get it back her mark?

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I didn't really think of that. I just wrote this as an orgigin for how and why she joined the village. What happened after she got it back is anyones guess.

Perhaps she somehow found a way to contribute to the community with ninja skills?

5903298 yes as long as her family doesn't hunt her for honor I think she be fine I mean she a security risk to them after all ninja as scary but honorable bond to duty and sacrifice... well lady luck to her cause the past has a way of coming back... need to stop ramble now sorry.

And so, the story ends. I think you ended it well and I liked how the double story line looped back onto itself. Little bit of feels showing, but not that I would let you see that.
I think ending the story here is fine, but (as always) I would like to see more of the story of night glider in the village, or even the origins of other ponies.
Don't listen to me, just keep doing what you want.

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