A hunter frozen by tragedy. A flame regretting what it’s burned. A beauty trying to forget the beast inside. An outcast searching for family. Join Cerulean and his companions as they embark on an epic adventure.
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Ok, this chapter was great. I liked the characterization of Ambar and Orchid. Keep up the good job.
Good thing this wasn't a prank or I would have been pissed. So without further ado, lets review:
Yeah, just because you added an extra number doesn't mean you're not ripping off an episode title.
Looks like we're going to get plenty of Frozen references with this story.
Oh, god dammit. You're going to do the old fire and ice relationship cliche. Well whatever, it's rare to find a straight Sunset Shimmer shipping story on this site.
I know you got this from somewhere, but I can't put my finger on where.
There in the Everfree Forest, who's going to put laws there? Better question, who's going to enforce it?
What does the fox say?
Have been watching Spice & Wolf?
You know, you think for once you can make a OC that wasn't such a......pussy? No that's not the right word. Eh, I think you get what I mean.
So why change into a fox? I don't see much of a benefit of turning into a fox. If anything it makes her more vulnerable and defenseless in her travels.
I still love doing that clapping thing from FMA.*end of review*
Well looks like we already have our team for this story. Amber and Orchid do seem like great characters and their personalities will bring plenty of entertainment throughout this story. Let's see if these four can work together in beating a dragon or will they crash and burn? And then get roasted afterwards.
5813694 Yeah I forgot that was an episode title and I have yet to see Frozen all the way through.
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Okay, I'm finding it hard to believe that you haven't finished Frozen.
5814742 Honestly I haven't. I know what happens because of my friends telling me and wikipedia, but I've only ever seen the 'let it go' musical number that was on Youtube.
Loving the story so far. I can see a possible fire-ice relationship between sunset and cerulean somewhere. Also love the guild reference; almost like fairy tail.