This story is a sequel to MLP 40K: Purge
The Most Holy Alicorn Inquisition of the Royal Pony Sisters is all that stands against threats to Ponykind that come from within. Inquisitor Sophic Fortune and her group of agents are investigating troubling events on the Equestrian world of Manducat Tertius.
It quickly becomes apparent that the unrest is more severe than originally guessed. Sophic and crew set off on an expedition into the underbelly of the planet's capital to discover the depth of the corruption. The investigation causes events to quickly spiral out of control, leaving the Inquisitor with very few options.
This is another short in my series of MLP 40K stories. Their purpose is to flex and stretch my brain a bit so that my larger story might actually get better with time. So, I'm working on fun things like pacing and trying to remain in genre (hard with there being two of them 
) Also looking to do some character development, if anypony cares about that kind of stuff. As always, constructive commentary is encouraged and appreciated.
I liked it. It shows how much of a "Anyone Can Die" universe the 40K universe actually is.
I wasn't expecting it to be parasprites, though. Nice job.
Tyvm. For both the feedback and the favorites.
Also, I have always viewed parasprites as being particularly "wrong" ever since I heard the phrase "They're eating the words!!!"
That one sent chills down my spine.