Children, such a word can be described as the single most precious word for any parent, who hopes to embrace one of their own.
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I was confused because you say three years later, but he is still a year old. Also, who is Mars? You mentioned him, but I have no idea who he is. I will continue to keep an eye on this story.
6643083 whoops that was a bit of mess up I'll try to re do it.
Just a little grammar and spelling mistakes but all and all a pretty good start.
Am not going to lie I like the story so far but I found out it was going to get a rewrite and read it I cant lie the rewrite is alot better it explains a lot more and makes more sense plus showing well known pony as children and interact with the main character is very different and not seen often in fan fic (well to me it is) so yea great story and off to a great start with this rewrite 😀