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They say that in space, no one can hear you scream. I figured that out the hard way. I will die up here.
However, I won't die without my family not receiving a final goodbye.
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Partially inspired by Iron Maiden's "Satellite 15... The Final Frontier". Good song. Go check it out.
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Just by the description, I think you kinda missed a great quote "In space... nobody can hear you scream."
Edit: or maybe that was intentional...
5699076 Yes, it was intentional, cosidering Sagitarrius was attempting to contact Mission Control to relay a final message to his family and peers.
I tried my absolute hardest to rectify any problems with my rushing of stories. I hope it's not too big a problem.
A few grammatical mistakes which we all have sometimes and one that could be argued about, but overall a fun little short story to read with a cool little plot!
5702959 Please point out the mistakes. I'll correct them.
5702959 Yeah, I was listening to the song listed in the description, and the idea struck me. It wasn't hard to make... Most of the time. And thanks for the feedback! I appreciate it!
I am so late... But
Beautiful
6862918 People told me that I had rushing problems with my other stories, so I set out to alleviate them here. It's kinda practice, kinda not.
May put the song in the description, in the description.
What an awesome story!
(No typos that I can recall.)
Definitely a thumbs up and love.
The only issue I currently have with this story is the lack of knowledge the unfortunate “star sailor" had of space and particularly, the launch.
The way the pilot tried to explain the launch, in my personal opinion, could of been better. Mainly becuase the way it is said, makes it sound like a simple process to my ears, despite knowing otherwise. If this was said differently, for example the following, I don't believe would have a personal issue with it.
(Only a suggestion, not a request and definitely not a demand.)
Please do understand, I love this story. This section is only part I have any issue with and you've got 8-ish newer stories out which I am looking forward to look at. Till then, awesome story here.
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Thank you!
Haven't seen this story do much of an anything beyond its first few days.