Ponies prefer their truth as a nice black and white that fits what they know to a tee. Changelings, on the other hoof, use the entire color spectrum when thinking about the truth.
The hivemind provides changelings a veritable library in their heads. They have a cover for every book—a mask for every occasion. They pick and choose the one they need, and the nuances of when and where I can expect them to use a particular mask is hidden in a giant web of logic that’s entirely too convoluted for their own good.
Working with Morpheus would lead to me almost habitually questioning three things when dealing with changelings.
What is the mask they’re currently wearing?
How much of the mask is real?
Why would they pick that mask over another?
This, of course, makes it sound like changelings are always lying about themselves, but there’s often huge a difference between the masks ponies wear and the masks changelings wear.
It’s not a lie to them.
Changelings have been forced to live and breathe through masks for thousands of years. An act they put on often blends into who they truly are, and who they truly are blends back into the act. It’s a constant two way street for them.
Their language even has an entire grammatical construct devoted to describing the relative truth of words—mask being one of the most variable—and Equish is completely unsuited at translating them all. There are at least five basic intonations a changeling can use saying mask. The shortest approximation I’ve been given for them is ‘full lie’, ‘partial truth to hide the lie’, ‘partial lie to hide the truth’, ‘positive double bluff’, and ‘negative double bluff’.
If that sounds overly complicated, it is. I have yet to meet a pony who can speak Chitri fluently, and I sometimes think the only reason changelings can is because they can just cheat and use the hivemind.
Oh, I’m sorry. I’m rambling again, aren’t I? It’s just so fascinating. And frustrating. A lecture just can’t really explain just how differently we see the idea of truth. It is something best learned through experience, and it was the following day where I began to understand the difference.
“Tell me again why we’re calling this brunch when it’s only nine in the morning,” Morpheus groused. His head was buried in his hooves, and he flinched at the light peeking through the holes. “It’s too early for brunch. No. It’s too early to even be up and about.”
I couldn’t help but concur, gurgling whimpers reminiscent of a dying dog choking on rainbows and sunshine.
Pinkie gigglesnorted. “Silly filly! Oops. You’re not a filly anymore. Silly col— Wait! Colt doesn’t rhyme with silly. That won’t work at all. Flingy ling? Clingy ling? Blingy ling? Ring-a-ding ling? I’ll come up with something. Anyways! Silly changeling-who-is-not-a-filly! It is totally brunch. Brunch means breakfast through lunch, and that’s what this is! It’s a breakfast fit to last through lunch.”
The table groaned in agreement as another plate of baked goods settled on it. It was bear claws this time, and I now counted forty-seven different kinds of breakfast pastry, seventeen bowls of fruit, twelve pitchers of various kinds of milk and juice, and one pancake palace complete with a little pancake princess inside.
I looked at the empty thermos in front of me with lifeless eyes. There was no emergency morning elixir for me today. Castle didn’t think to refill all the emergency rations. Spike would have done it daily the instant I got a project this big, but the all-powerful Castle apparently didn’t have the initiative to do it unless I asked first.
“Coffee’s ready!” Applejack trotted from the kitchen with several pitchers of bitter ambrosia balanced on a tray on her back. “Sorry it took so long, but your pantries don’t make a lick of sense, sugarcube.”
They were organized alphabetically just like everything else. Granted I normally alphabetically sorted things after first organizing them in a more meaningful way, but my kitchen skills were limited to coffee and burnt toast, so…
“Hey! I don’t even need to make the eclairs. They were under E!” Pinkie clearly understood the system.
A carefully practiced teleport spell between the coffee and my emergency thermos saved a precious few seconds of time wasted pouring. A quick cooling spell made the first thermos hot enough to enjoy but cool enough to drink with abandon, and I guzzled it black without pausing for breath.
There was the shuffling of newspaper as Rarity lowered the Canterlot Times to glance at me before quickly raising it again. “Twilight, darling, can you please drink with some decorum? We all know you aren’t a morning pony, but you’re such a drama queen about it sometimes.”
“So says the queen of queens to the meager princess.” I could snark again. Soon enough caffeine would hit my system to actually allow real conversation.
Rarity huffed. “So declares the queen of queens to the meager princess in the presence of foreign royalty.”
“Don’t drag me into this.” There was a clicking noise, and the holes in Morpheus’ legs closed up further hiding him from light. “Twilight has my full support here. I have no idea how the rest of you are so chipper after a meager four to five hours of sleep.” He pointed at Applejack. “You especially need more sleep after yesterday.”
Applejack chuckled. “Ah’d be lying if Ah didn’t say part of it was your reactions. There’s something mighty funny about seeing Princess Celestia’s personal student grumble about the sun. Besides Ah’ve been working the farm since I was a filly. Getting up at the crack of dawn is in my blood.”
Rainbow grinned and puffed out her chest. “I don’t need sleep. I get by on power naps because I’m tough enough to be on call for weather duty twenty-four seven.”
Rarity folded the paper and rolled her eyes. “You mean you’re able to get by on naps because they save you mostly for the big weather but pay you all the same. I know how the weather system works, Rainbow. I was a weather unicorn once, after all. Thunderlane did almost nothing but strut like a peacock around Flitter and Cloudchaser unless I was on duty messing up.” She nodded towards Applejack. “However, I’m sure your marefriend is willing to attest to the many sleepless nights that come with being a tailor.”
“Why I ought to…”
I tuned out Rarity and Rainbow Dash’s banter. They had had this argument too many times for it to be anything but friendly ribbing by now.
Instead, I enjoyed my second thermos. It was the rule. Get the first coffee as fast as possible but savor the second as if it was my last. I poured this one slowly to maximize the amount of that incredible aroma filling the air, and I mixed in the perfect amount of milk to dull the bitterness to a comfortable level. There was no need for sugar.
I sipped from the thermos and hummed in appreciation at the familiar warmth spreading through my extremities. My ear flicked as it caught quiet murmuring from Fluttershy, but it was so quiet I had to strain to hear it.
“…So after that, I learned I needed to be ready to help nocturnal animals at a moments notice too. Being a scaredy-cat helped too for once, actually. I’m such a light sleeper I can’t help but be a morning pony. At least… that’s what I think…. if you don’t mind… I could be wrong….”
Who was she talking to?
Morpheus shrugged with his head still buried in his hooves.
Ah. I smiled, letting their conversation wash over me as I savored my coffee.
“Oh… good…. Thank you for letting me be so quiet, by the way.”
Quiet was an understatement. It took almost all of my concentration to comprehend her.
“It’s not often anypony bedsides my animal friends tries to listen when I’m this quiet. A lot of the time everypony is just too focused on everypony else to realize I’m speaking until I raise my voice, and as much as I’m used to it by now I still don’t like it, and— Oh… I’m sorry…. I’m rambling, aren’t I? It’s just so much easier to talk like this. You aren’t mad are you?”
There was a brief buzz from the prince’s wings. The others looked over at that, and my heart skipped a beat. Buzzing had mostly signaled some form of stress or anger so far, but Fluttershy tittering on the threshold of my hearing stopped me from standing. Holding a hoof out to waylay the others, I pointed to Fluttershy.
She hadn’t seen us tense. Morpheus had shifted subtly when I had started to stand, but then she had immediately started fussing over him like he was one of her animal friends.
He was taking it calmly, all things considered.
Everything seemed fine, so…
Shaking my head, I tutted to myself for getting paranoid and signaled the others to go back to what they were doing. They obliged, casting an occasionally not-so-subtle glance toward the prince.
“Oh, I’m so, so sorry…” Fluttershy murmured, poking at Morpheus like he was about to shatter. “Did my laugh bother you? Was it too loud?”
I held back a snicker at that.
“My cheer sent Rainbow crashing into the library once. Don’t tell me I need to be more careful with my laugh….”
Morpheus gave another shrug, and Fluttershy sighed in relief. The prince hadn’t actually said a single word to her yet as far as I could tell, and I was seriously trying to puzzle out if that was good or bad. Celestia knew he could talk when he wanted to. We had talked for hours just the other day.
Only one way to find out.
“Hey, Fluttershy—” I began.
Fluttershy squeaked and turned her head around fast enough that she might have gotten whiplash. “Twilight! Don’t sneak up on me!”
“This is my castle, Fluttershy.” I smiled. “Why would I be sneaking up on you?”
She kicked at the ground. “Oh, right…. Sorry…. I guess I was just distracted. Morpheus seemed a little off, and you and the others were all doing something else so I tried to talk with him.”
My smile grew before morphing into a frown. “That’s great! But Morpheus doesn’t seem to be doing much talking.”
Morpheus buzzed his wings once more, and Fluttershy smiled and nodded to him. A rather disturbing number of clacks and cracks came from his body as many of the joints in his exoskeleton popped while he stood. “That’s because we weren’t talking in the traditional sense.”
His voice came out an octave too low, and he stretched his jaw as if testing it for faults. There was a quick flash of his horn and his voice was back to normal—normal for him, at least.
“It was somewhat one way, however. Ve must apologize, Miss Fluttershy. I haven’t had a proper heart-to-heart since my chrysalling. Most of the other lords don’t trust anyling, and the common changeling wouldn’t dare be so informal with me. Talking with you was a—” He thrummed. “—pleasant surprise.”
“A what-to-what?” everypony chorused.
“Jinx!” yelled Pinkie from the kitchen, and we all started slightly. Tuning out the bubbly singing and the out-of-place construction noise had become automatic over time.
Morpheus chuckled at everypony’s expressions, especially Fluttershy’s. “Did you not realize what you were doing?”
Fluttershy shook her head timidly, and Morpheus laughed. “How fascinating! Ve figured it would be obvious to you since you’re the Element of Kindness. A heart-to-heart is just what it sounds like. Since changelings can sense emotion, we can communicate with it. You may not literally sense emotion, but you empathize with others so easily that you do it all the time with your animal friends.”
He stopped suddenly, shoulders drooping, as he saw Fluttershy sinking in on herself. “And this is why I didn’t actually voice anything when talking to you. Sorry…. I’ll just go and run the preliminary scans.”
“Umm…” Unfortunately, the caffine still hadn’t completely kicked in after so many restless nights.
The rest of my friends seemed to share my bafflement.
He started shifting into his disguise from yesterday. “I’m sorry everypony. It was really nice meeting you all, but Twilight and I potentially have an unknown number of rogues to deal with, so…”
“Wait a minute. Mor—“ I began, but he almost flew out the door. His sixth sense was apparently incredibly dense sometimes.
“Okay…” I began rubbing my temples to avoid my friends questioning looks. “I have no idea what he’s talking about, but I assume that means there was something I needed to tell you.”
“Ya think?” drawled Applejack.
“You’re not helping,” I scrunched my face in contemplation. “What was it? What was it?”
“Ah don’t know. Why don’t you tell us?” One could hear Applejacks signature eyebrow arch.
Thankfully—or not—my blood to caffine ratio finally hit optimum levels. “Sweet Celestia, how did I forget there might be other changelings?!” I prepared to teleport, but Rainbow flicked my horn. “Ow! What was that for?”
She glowered at me. “Well, you can’t leave us with just that.”
Pinkie spasmed out of the kitchen. “Yeah! I need to know how many extra parties that means.”
She looked at the mostly untouched table as her face was stuck with the look of somepony about to sneeze and she did an approximation of the potty dance. “Aww… You guys barely even started munching the brunch, although I guess it isn’t brunch anymore if we’re all leaving. We all know what wriggly nose, itchy withers, and ballooning bladder means. I have to go check that my stashes are prepared before I bolt myself in the shelter’s bathroom.”
Dash groaned. “Seriously! They told me we were done with the surprise emergency weather drills.”
Applejack chuckled. “They’re supposed to be a surprise, hon. It ain’t our fault Cloudsdale don’t buy into the Pinkie Sense.”
Dash snorted. “Yeah, but neither of us can stick around to keep an eye on Twilight and the fly if we’re busy prepping for that.”
“You were planning on spying on us?” I frowned.
Applejack shook her head. “Of course we weren’t. It ain’t spying if we’re open and honest about it.”
I went back to rubbing my temples. “Yes. That’s much, much closer to stalking. Whatever…. I suppose it’s better than blindly imagining Morpheus doing fiendish crimes to me behind your backs.”
Rarity tittered. “He doesn’t have the build for fiendish crimes, darling. Villains that commit fiendish crimes are always dreadfully ugly, and—unless he’s committing crimes against fashion—I doubt a shapeshifter would ever willingly be ugly. He’s more of a heinous villain than a fiendish one.”
I groaned. “What did I say about making this into one of your books, Rarity?”
A tinkling laugh answered. “I read more than trashy romance, Twilight. I just happen to prefer books that are a bit more risqué.”
“Umm…” Fluttershy tentatively interrupted, “Not to interrupt or anything, but I kind of need to go now if that’s alright with everypony. My cottage is kind of far and the animals…” Her voice trailed off.
“We all need to get going Ah reckon.” Applejack nodded. “And Ah’m sure Twilight will tell us about whatever the hay the bug was talking about on the way.”
I sighed. “Come on then. We can talk about it while I see you all off, but I want a Pinkie Promise you won’t overreact until we all get a better idea of what’s going on.”
just had read this today and later it updated WONDERFUL CHAPTER TOO
FIRST don't blame me! YOU looked
I get the feeling Morpheus would have a wonderful time just relaxing with Fluttershy and Discord. Tea and shooting the breeze with no regard for formality or subterfuge.
Nice chapter :)
Btw i think that caffine is written caffeine
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oops... that's odd I could have sworn the spell checker in word accepted that, but I just checked a couple dictionary's and none of them spell it like I did... I wonder if I accidentally added an incorrect version to the word dictionary?
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That may or may not actually be one of the mini arcs I was toying with for the Settling In portion of the story.
But yes... That would definitely be a situation for a 'positive double bluff' mask. And, yes, I actually know the difference between the five different basic masks, but I can't think of a way to actually describe it that properly emphasizes the differences between them -- subtle as they may be. I have a feeling it might remain purposely vague for each reader to interpret differently.
A 'positive double bluff' mask roughly equates to 'acting yourself because you can, but habitually evaluating that it is still alright to do so' -- not to be confused with a 'negative double bluff' mask which is 'acting yourself as a means to psych others out'. A situation like this breakfast was 'a partial truth to hide the lie' since Morpheus was acting like himself to a degree, but mostly because it was the best option and not because he was free to do so. And that sounds much too similar to a 'positive double bluff' as I read it, which is why I don't think I'm going to bother to try explaining it in story and simply hope I can show it.
6470769 You would not be the first one to do such thing XD
I deeply enjoyed Twilight's coffee issues this chapter, and the little details like her teleporting it around from pot to thermos.
Fluttershy's conversation with Morpheus was pretty fascinating, too.
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I say leave the nuances for the readers to puzzle out. What one may interpret one way, another may see entirely differently. Could make for some interesting theories and comment discussions.
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Yeah. It's not like real cultures can only be interpreted one way.
Besides, it might actually be good that I can't describe it adequately. It lends truth to what Twilight said about Equish (a.k.a. English) being unable to translate it well, and it makes the culture feel more real to me. I'm not just inventing the culture willy-nilly: I'm literally facing some of the same roadblocks I create for ponies despite my inside insight as the author. I'd call that a personal success for this story even if it means showing the culture becomes harder.
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I'm glad you enjoyed the coffee scenes. I admit I was a tad worried it might come across as a little too obsessive. Granted, Twilight is obsessive, but there's a point where it just won't be a believable obsession unless its for an isolated gag in the story or she's panicking.
ballooning bladder....ouch.
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It is a discrepancy, but it is one that is meant to be there. It actually goes further back to when Pinkie guessed Morpheus was a changeling, and he accidentally confirmed it while drunk on joy which should have technically triggered the death clause but didn't. As to why it didn't work... It could be the way Twilight worded the original order -- which was never shown -- or it could be something in the way Morpheus originally drew up the contract. Recall that there were defensive clauses mentioned that gave him more liberty to act if threatened.
6484796 Oh, O.K.. It seems that I forgot about the defensive clauses, thanks for the reminder.
Pinkie pie is the best character because she can casually break the narrative to advance the plot and comes pre-lampshaded.
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one such condition being under the effects of severe intoxication.
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I'm guessing that the reason he wasn't vaporized was probably due to a technicality at first. Most likely that he didn't actually reveal himself to be a changeling, so much as others were able to figure it out themselves based on clues. After all, with changelings being such masters of disguise and being so cautious, Morpheus probably didn't include much about that into the contract in terms of Ponies being able to deduce somepony was actually someling on their own.
I also imagine that once they knew about him being a changeling, he'd be able to drop his disguise. The contract with Twilight about her friends becoming invalid or void once they knew he was really a changeling. Probably due to the whole "don't reveal yourself to be a changeling", but since they already KNEW, if he dropped his disguise it wouldn't be a reveal.
At least that's my take on it. I'm too lazy to go back to reread what they actually discussed, plus there may be more stuff based upon the actual legalese in the actual contract itself
This is an amazing story, and we're looking forward to seeing where it goes now that everything's in the open. My interpretation of the changelings does definitely differ in places, but that by no means means we can't appreciate another well-developed portrait of hive life, and you really do paint a very nice picture.
To not get bogged down, though, what's jumped out at us most strongly is the heart-to-heart communication. The plural pronouns on here aren't an accident; I (Sam) have been sharing my head with someone else (Russett) the past couple years, and while our own story isn't too relevant at the moment -- in short, look into tulpas -- Morpheus's pride in Twilight and conversation with Fluttershy remind us of how we used to (and still do, at times) talk to each other. Language is surprisingly difficult, so when he was younger and less well-established in our mind, Russ would respond in flashes of emotion much like what you've depicted. We have moved away from that since -- I was never as quick at it and mainly used English, and while (as he told one of our first friends to know about him) "tulpish" works great within a system, it's quite a bit more direct if the person in front only needs to relay what their headmates are saying when interacting with the rest of the world than it is if they need to translate everything as well -- but it's rather heartwarming (he's additionally going with "nostalgic") to see it in use again, and beyond those bounderies at that. We're actually rather inspired to try to bring it back into our own conversations, beyond just throwing love at each other and falling back on it when talking about particular emotions. Thank you!
And, actually, when I suggested working on that, as we were finishing the chapter, Russ responded with a perfect (if mental) changeling-style shrug of interested assent worthy of the prince. Got us both laughing for a few minutes!
Actually, there is a strong case that RD would need to keep very odd hours even in stories where she is just a "big weather" specialist.
You see, my "headcanon" is that one of Rainbow's duties is watching over the Everfree's weather, because severe weather would naturally form there with relatively little warning and would need to be kept out of Ponyville (I can very much see Ponyville's scheduled weather being very rote and very mild, as in Cold in Gardez's "Severe Weather Appreciation Week").
When would the Everfree's weather be least predictable and most in need of monitoring? Dawn and dusk because of the changes in insolation.
Hence, I can easily imagine Dash waking up before dawn, going back to bed at 9 or 10, and then waking up shortly before sunset and working until well after dusk.
Cf, Taranth's "One of Those Days", in which (even though in that story RD's duties are more extensive) dawn and dusk and the Everfree are precisely why weather is such hard work:
Also, Thunderlane strutting? Like this?
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Actually, I would have suspected that the Contract had had a clause about reduced culpability under the intoxicating effects of strong emotions, especially when the intoxication is inadvertent. Maybe you could add that when you next rewrite your story.