My name is Winter. I am a griffin brought by a goddess to a world of magic with no goal in mind, but that doesn't stop me from creating enough chaos to make discord blush and having a kid..
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Wow. Well I guess I have to start working at it.
I think I might have done that as a little kid. Can't remember though...
I got to Dr. Soft Touch and lost it. "Don't worry little fillies, Dr. Soft Touch'll handle you nice and gently."
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*say in whispery voice* "Nurse Sweat Heart"
5691856 I didn't. I bawled like the child I was and then thanked the nurse, which caused her to start crying.
It was great.
Better then the first chapter as far as grammar is concerned and I do like the fact that he is heading away from common cannon areas and into area's not commonly written about or seen in the show. Thanks for posting
He did soft touch so dirt
Turning down Spitfire's offer doesn't seem in character, from the back story you gave he cares more about stuff than he does about were he gets it. To him free money is free money, whether it's personally reappropriated, or given out for whatever reason. A person like that would be taking whatever he could get and then finding a little more. He gave up free money for freedom, why? He had always had freedom. Freedom would be less important to him than luxuries and money because he had always had the first and never the second. I can't say I've ever seen an OC act OOC before, but there is a first time for everything.
So... You completely and utterly ruined and destroyed the life and job of a mare, possibly forcing her to eventually become homeless, simply because you felt like doing a prank.
Yeah, that totally makes sense from a character that seemed to value females far beyond males.
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Ok, normally I try to find a reason for everything a story character does but.....We art confused.......there was no reason for that and it made no sense.
That’s a bit screwed