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grant7654x3

People I don't care how bad my stories are don't tell me I know, trust me. I wright them for fun and no more and no less just for fun.

grant7654x3 Joined 23rd Mar, 2014 · Offline

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Gold Experience
Gold Experience #3 · Apr 25th, 2015 · · · Finding her Friends ·
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I'll give you points for the premise. I'm a sucker for adventure stories, especially clop adventure stories. But you really need to work on your grammar dude. Plus, and I don't want to offend or anything, a little originality won't hurt. You got something interesting here, its such a shame to see it wasted.

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Regidar #4 · Apr 25th, 2015 · · · A Purple Star ·
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"Man I wish something cool would happen here." A guy said as he walked through the woods in the middle of the night. "But at least the night sky is full of stars. White ones, blue ones, and even a purple one coming right at me." He said with wide eyes and diving to his left as it crashed and slid a good two yards.

is this the logical conclusion to literature

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