- Well, using "drug" in that type of context is incorrect, but that was the only mistake you made. Next, how yearn was the character stuck in the POW camp? It sounded about five, years, so how can a pony beaten daily survive for such a ample amount of time?
580587 You're right, time to beat my pre reader. I'm looking at you, Roxy. For your question, I'm assuming you mean "how long was she in the camp" or "how young was she when she was taken to the camp". As for that, it will be revealed later. The character herself doesn't know and since this is a first person fic, I can't reveal anything the character does not know or is told. It will be explained later though, promise.
582688 Nah, he did catch a bunch of stuff and I can't expect anyone to catch absolutely everything. Plus, we're rl bros and he'll be doing some artwork for me.
Seriously though, you'll find out later. Although now that I think about it, Woona doesn't need to be tagged. In the first draft her part was a lot bigger, but now I'm realizing I don't need her as much. Celestia is best pony anyway.
713031 I'm about halfway through chapter 2 as of right now. To be honest, I really don't know. I wish I could give an exact date or at least an approximate date, but I can't. I write on completely on urges. I need to be in the mood to write. A lot or writers are good at sitting down and forcing themselves to write, but I tend to write complete and udder crap when I try to force myself to write. I would like to say by Friday or Saturday, but I can't make any promises.
Oh my god, this is brilliant. Faved, thumbed, and wanting more!
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Well, using "drug" in that type of context is incorrect, but that was the only mistake you made.
Next, how yearn was the character stuck in the POW camp? It sounded about five, years, so how can a pony beaten daily survive for such a ample amount of time?
Work on it, BUT!
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Very bewitching, keep it up!
The story looks to have potential. Have a moustache!
Eagerly awaiting what happens next
This is looking very interesting...
Have my fav!
And another moustache...
This shows promise.
I expect great things from you.
This has the potential to be epic!
tracked and watched, please don't disappoint
good show now onto the next chapter.
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You're right, time to beat my pre reader. I'm looking at you, Roxy.
For your question, I'm assuming you mean "how long was she in the camp" or "how young was she when she was taken to the camp". As for that, it will be revealed later. The character herself doesn't know and since this is a first person fic, I can't reveal anything the character does not know or is told. It will be explained later though, promise.
To everypony else, thanks for reading!
582242 Indeed. Proofreaders should know more about grammar than you.
582242
:c
582688
Nah, he did catch a bunch of stuff and I can't expect anyone to catch absolutely everything.
Plus, we're rl bros and he'll be doing some artwork for me.
583083 Indeed. Good luck with future writing.
Must. Have. MOER!!!!
Seriously, I need it. Pleees?
583083
so wait, is this a twiluna? or luna x oc?
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No, no. It's a Rainbow Dash x Everypony.
Seriously though, you'll find out later. Although now that I think about it, Woona doesn't need to be tagged. In the first draft her part was a lot bigger, but now I'm realizing I don't need her as much. Celestia is best pony anyway.
This is beautifully sad. Insta-fav!
when dya think yall update?
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I'm about halfway through chapter 2 as of right now. To be honest, I really don't know. I wish I could give an exact date or at least an approximate date, but I can't. I write on completely on urges. I need to be in the mood to write. A lot or writers are good at sitting down and forcing themselves to write, but I tend to write complete and udder crap when I try to force myself to write. I would like to say by Friday or Saturday, but I can't make any promises.
727039 alright understandable just keep it up this story is too good to die like so many others.