Lyra has a twin sister that she doesn't like to talk about. Her name is Lyler and she's a bit... different. When Anon gets stuck catching Lyler's attention, he goes on a ride that even bleach can't remove.
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This chapter definitely had a different tone to the rest.
But... why did she starve to death? If she refused to eat, would she not be force-fed, or given nutrition intravenously?
Or were we meant to take this chapter as a metaphor for the writing process behind this story? Do you worry it's 'fading away' or 'starving' due to inattention? Honestly, if you feel like Lyler really isn't letting you 'feed' her, then it's fine if you need to take a while until you can write more easily.
Still, I would be lying if I said I wasn't glad that you're writing more Lyler again, Priest, and I hope you're feeling okay.
Whew... well, like Alex_ said, this chapter has a different tone than the other chapters, kinda sad really.
Not sure what to take away from this, hmm.
Well... good work Priest, Good work as always
Fuck priest, you really killed my mood there. Still, nice chapter.
Wow, sad but almost beautiful