Her Brother?!

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Feelsbadbro1337

Feelsbadbro1337 #1 · Jan 26th, 2015 · · · Don't you want this?! (cloppity clop clop) ·

simply amazing

Dragonzero

Dragonzero #2 · Jan 26th, 2015 · 9 · 2 · Don't you want this?! (cloppity clop clop) ·

this need 1 more chapter to show what happens to this FUCKER. i vote have his balls cut off

Tszeb

Tszeb #3 · Jan 26th, 2015 · 3 · · Don't you want this?! (cloppity clop clop) ·

Please make the bonus chapter

Anmynous

Anmynous #4 · Jan 28th, 2015 · · · Don't you want this?! (cloppity clop clop) ·

5551608
Well, since he fulfilled his "demand", he'll presumably switch back to his own body, which is locked up tight in a basement... don't think anyone's gonna find that guy anytime soon.

Dragonzero

Dragonzero #5 · Jan 28th, 2015 · · · Don't you want this?! (cloppity clop clop) ·

5560292 I can see you have a point. But he is a unicorn and can use magic. He knocked out Shinning Armor but did not do anything to stop his magic so he might escape. An then the reason I say cut his ball off is to kill his sex drive or he can use someone ells.

an1979

an1979 #6 · Feb 1st, 2015 · 2 · · Don't you want this?! (cloppity clop clop) ·

Needs 'karma is a bitch' bonus chapter ;)

Typos:
(chapter 1)
Off to the side of the street, I saw my own body sway and hold it's head.
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Sometimes working at a mental hospital can have it's upsides.
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(chapter 2)
I sat down and stared at the daisy sandwich before me, it's bright demeanour
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