Hmmm...nothing we haven't seen before (and don't forget to properly punctuate lines of dialogue) but not bad thus far. I like the premise and will continue reading.
seemed interesting at first but don't think its my cup of coffee. looks quite rushed with the whole "love at first sight" kinda deal not to mention sort of hating RD's personality in this fic.
6359118 At least it's not as rushed as August Rush-type love at first sight. I personally find that kind of speed-attracting is just simply not believable, know what I mean?
Hmmm...nothing we haven't seen before (and don't forget to properly punctuate lines of dialogue) but not bad thus far. I like the premise and will continue reading.
I think you should clarify if the ponies are anthro or not. I honestly can't tell.
Nice. I will definetly keep an eye on this story. Keep up the good work
This was definitely a cute read! Anon remind's me so much of me XD Can't wait for the next chapter.
Who the hell names their kid "Anonymous"?
I know it's a 2nd-person fic, but still, the story could've just said "you give her your name" and would've been just fine.
5545433 Same here it was a little strange.
5549745 "Anonymous" is a very popular second person name inside fan fiction, due to it allowing more versatility to what the character can appear as.
Anon needs to take lessons about dancing from Shepard.
5585651 damn right he needs to learn the shepard shuffle
5544869 but then again, there really isnt much we havent seen on this site.
seemed interesting at first but don't think its my cup of coffee. looks quite rushed with the whole "love at first sight" kinda deal not to mention sort of hating RD's personality in this fic.
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At least it's not as rushed as August Rush-type love at first sight. I personally find that kind of speed-attracting is just simply not believable, know what I mean?
7230413 Eeyup! Well some I can believe I've expierenced it alittle didn't work out though!
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Aye, it's probably butts.
As for height, probably something like this or perhaps a bit smaller. Anon is a tall guy I guess.