Black Eye, a name that had begun to strike fear in the hearts of those who new they were targets for bounty hunters in the Wastelands. And for good reason. But now, he gives up his job to pursue the one who had almost killed him.
Hey not bad for a first fic.
I would suggest leaving a line between paragraphs though it just looks neater.
I see you already have one down-vote but i wouldn't get discouraged. Fallout: Equestria fics seem to bare a certain stigma on this site.
5546242 There we go, I checked out other fics for reference and added spacing accordingly. Look better?
Hey not bad for a first fic.
I would suggest leaving a line between paragraphs though it just looks neater.
I see you already have one down-vote but i wouldn't get discouraged. Fallout: Equestria fics seem to bare a certain stigma on this site.
5546242 There we go, I checked out other fics for reference and added spacing accordingly. Look better?