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Oh man it's finally here...  Now I can finally continue reading this.

>>537529537529

You're watching this TOO!!!  Freak out time.

Also, Ciroton, will this be getting updated as quickly as your DeviantArt page?

>>537549537549

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>>537564537564

Now I get the feeling this could quickly turn into a reply spam, that could last for hours (or till AT&T decides to throw a hissy fit).

Oh great I love this story. Thanks for posting it here.

>>537576537576 Better end it now, then

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>>537585537585

Possibly before poor Ciroton wakes up to 130 new posts, though I am starting to think we both have a habit of being the last person to reply.

>>537598537598 It's impolite to ignore people

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Oh dear Celestia, now I have another story with stories before this one that I must read.

>>537613537613

But after so much posting, I think we would be able to come to a mutual agreement on when to cease.

>>537628537628 Perhaps... perhaps...

>>537636537636

Ciro is gonna be happy about the number of comments, that is until he sees it was only two people who couldn't stop.  

>>537650537650 Yeah

>>537656537656

So how about we give Ciro a break and reduce the number of comments (you don't have to reply, I won't be hurt if you don't ).

>>537666537666 Okay, I suppose I can stop... wait, dammit

>>537549537549

Three a week, Monday, Wednesday and Friday until It has either caught up to Deviant Art, and/or I have finished all of the First Drafts. From there, it will progress at the same time, with Deviant Art being first as the coding for that has to be done manually. Then, I can copy/paste over here and adjust as needed. It's the perfect plan!

>>537700537700

Simple and time efficient, I like it.  Though I still get the feeling I will be checking DA out of habit.

Twilight do you think you can make all the right choices? Save everyone? Save Equestria?

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"... Just YOU watch me."

I guess I'll watch this fic, though I read it on Deviant Art so I kind of know what will happen for a good many chapters.

It's here! It's here!

"Squee!"

yes... sqeee...

Oh, words can not describe how much I love this story. I am fav'ing this so hard, I might break the button. Sorry if the rest of you guys can't favorite this after.

YES.

It has begun.

Ciroton! Ciroton!

Might as well re read it here to remember the finer details i forgot over time.

i dont know why i never got around to reading this...well; perfect opportunity i guess...

For Want of a Dawn is here

Buck yes. DW is very happy. Easily one of true best fics ever.

>>537533537533>>537549537549 Here, allow me to join you gentlemen in freaking out.

*ahem*

ITS HERE!! FOR WANT OF A DAWN IS HERE!!

Now I dont have to go site hopping and try to track down Cirotonin or attempt to read EVERY update on EqD.

Now I wait until shortly after Twi buys a hat.

>>537731537731 Part of me wants to put a picture of Eccelston and say "Just this once, everybody lives just this once!" but I already know thats not quite the case...

"I told you not to, you silly filly."

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Oh sweet Celestia. Another awesome fic on Fimfiction. Glad you finally hosted it here!

Yay, can't wait for all chapters to be uploaded and that you start updating here alongside updates on deviantart.

woah, i didnt expect THAT to happen...

Just spend the past two days reading all your stories, and the further chapters on deviant art, really hope your continuing as i love the story and has become one of my favority fan fics can't wait to see what happens!!!!

this is GREAT

Congratulations, Spike, you're the new Rainbow Dash!

YUUUUUUUSSS!!! Been following Ciroton since My Little Muffin, and this one is here too *faves

Love the story

Keep it up! Oh and how many chapters will this be?

>>600706600706

25 Chapters.

See picture.

think it's my story that got featured

realization sets in

>>612906612906

I'm sorry if I deceived you.

it was a strange feeling: to want fluttershy to just go and die...

Well she IS pretty much a bitch at this point in the fic, Mossflower. It's not only understandable, it's actually less than I imagined. I actually imagined going to the world of this fic as a Spawn and really just delivering her a fate worse than death, that would take her sudden obsession with 'nature' and turn it inside out.

S-so d-dashies d-d-dead?

Damn i think now she'll trust Eos (considering she's the only one who'll speak to her without lying). baka desu nee! spike you foolish child in betraying twilight in this way you've just doomed first the shaky dragon alliance and afterward the whole of equestria to a desparing twilight the only requittal i see is if somehow the ghosts of celly and luna come and help twi with her mental break down. which i doubt will help save spike from her second more vicious breakdown. poor twi and all she wants is to be loved and accepted and what does she get in return full betrayal from every pony she knew and cared about and now spikes gonna be the last straw. i just know it.

Edit: How the bu@% did i get FIRST?

Anyway good job lad you should be proud of this masterpiece.

And just for kicks

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It was never very clear that Twilight came to a different dimension.  I believed until just last chapter that Twilight was simply in stasis for ten years and that Eos had somehow split off her because of her touching the pool.  I had no idea that Eos is simply twilight from this dimension.  Can you clarify?

IT

IS

HERE

YEAH

Luve it !!!!

heh, it's a miracle Twilight's still relatively sane...

ok everythings well now twi tho is not going to be happie when she wakes up especially not towards spike. and now i see the rebels are screwed completely out of their plans now that twi is completely learned and taught not to trust them. the dragons will be in even more hot water now because both twi's are angry at them.now all i have to say is twi's going to have to talk to eos since she's the only one besides tentatively trixie she can trust anymore. spike i'll say this again you bucking screwed up worse than you could possibly imagine.

anyway keep up the awsome chapters bro cheers.

>>629550629550 Eos as explaned in the chapter redemption of the first story sunset she is basically twilights inner deity, in for want of dawn twilight is forced by the waters in the pool of midnight to live a waking vision/dream that sets her within a world where she as Eos didn't listen to luna and became the pony queen. they are both twilight and eos. hope this helps

Edit1: what you stated above is also what twilight was thinking until she found the cmc headquarters then she realized the full truth of her situation and now spike just went and botched up the only chance of having twi actually fight Eos she might even go to her just to spite those who betrayed her.

oh, how i hope that twi will embrace eos a little more now, i also hope that she's a little more cold hearted; that would be fun to watch the next time vinyl tries to capture her...although sadly i imagine that she is broken in the other way instead (like being scared of everything and everyone and just plain pathetic)

>>638443638443

we dont know if she is yet (although it would be a pretty dull story if she was completely nuts the rest of it)...she's been unconscious the whole time, that is; unless you've read from EqD and know what is coming

YES!!!

Ciroton is on fimfiction, my day has been made

Please don't let there be an OC tag...Please don't let there be an OC tag....Please don't let there be an OC- CRAP!!!!!

yay, another of my EQD stories on this handy site!

>>646375646375

It's not a self-insert or anything like that. At best, there are incidental OCs and nothing more. Twilight and the Mane 6 are the focus.

I loved Sunset, but the introduction of this story really didn't do it for me. Too much yanking the readers around by the nose, I think.

Still, it's good to see Ciroton put his work on here; this site is far better than DA for... well, everything.

yay now they have a destination. time for a big rush. hopefully the meeting with queen eos doesn't turn into a fight.

God the cutie mark crusaders are dum "do you think she knows whats going on"   "nah" i mean seriously how can they lead a rebellion if they cant see that

Is it bad that the only bit I find sad about this story is the fact luna is dead

that picture...

>>669632669632 It's actually more appropriate for the prequel to this, where the scene in the picture is present.

cant wait for the next update hopefully they dont run into pinki pie she's a nightmare at the moment.

Name and general appearance of Nightmare used with permission from Butterscotchsundae. Thank you, again!

Nice, time to read again!

-Minty

Damn it! My read later list is sooo long! I can't decide whether to add this to the list! Someone help me!!! OR maybe I could read it now........ I'm too indecisive......

Cool reference to the game. I did enjoy playing it. I wonder if there is a fanfiction about it.

>>681495681495

if you've read Blood is Thicker, sunset and The Reluctant Reunion of the Redoubtable Rabble-Rouser (in that order if you havent read them already), and if you liked sunset in particular, then i would strongly recommend that you begin reading this stat! (dont add it to a list, that just delays it and makes it harder to start when you later see the length of this story)

This is almost as good as CUPCAKES

>>681897681897 Thanks for the assist. [+50 points!] I'll do that.

>>681904681904

no problem

I wonder how many of your bronies and pegasisters reading this only here have figured out what the pool of Midnight wants Twilight to learn from this experience, I won't say, I commented about it on the last chapter on DA, by which point it's really obvious.

>>ymom2

If you notice in a few of the earlier chapters Eos spoke to twilight, giving her advice. Each time, however, Twilight would shun her inner goddess and tell her something along the lines of Shut up and Eos would shrink back into her mind. That is why there hasn't been any sustained conversations between them. Also if you remember when Vinyl was carrying Twilight out of the Everfree forest and they were attacked by those creatures I believe Eos helped Twilight by giving her a burst of magic that destroyed the mythryl band around her horn and the vines that had her bound. You missing it is understandable, because there is no specific explanation as to what it is. Also there is the fact that everyone says that Twilight never came back after she rocketed away from the exploding sugarcube corner and when she first entered future Ponyville and went to her library all the books were in the same formation as when she first found that she was a golem. That means that the library had been abandoned since then. All this has been hinting to an alternate dimension since she was first sent forward.

Into The Lair Of The Sun God Pt. 1 - Dawnbringer

hay yess all i have to say is twi will either go to eos or do option 2 if she does option 3 i will be suprised.

so awesome! i keep looking for this every day, even if it's like 3 days in between updates it still feels like more than a week

i have a question though: why do they always choose to look "a point above his/her/it's head and to the right" when they can't look straight into his/hers/it's face?

>>701116701116

im leaning more towards: she "chooses" option 1, starts the new journey, "stuff" happens, making her ultimately choose option nr 3.

to me it feels like option 1 and 2 are a polite ways of saying "suicide", naturally making nr 3 the obvious choice in the end, of course; at this point option nr 3 is quite impossible to even consider for twi.

>>701862701862 but if you read the earlyer chapters you'd realize that that eos sent the bounty to capture twi only to protect her form the eventual betrayals of her friends and to keep her safe also it was to ensure her perminant rule considering twi's power. so option 1 wouldn't be suicide but it would be tantamount to giving up. option 2 i agree would be semi suicide its the one i think twi is most likely to pic sence it sounds most like suicide but least like suicide from twi's perspective considering she beleaves eos evil she will choose the path least involving her. tho i do live the way genesis worded his reply to her comment about killing eos.   as for option 3 well... that is absolute suicide considering how cruel her friends still are.

i mean the only good one of the main six remaning besides twi is rainbow dash and she's burried ten feet under rainbow juce not to mention her element is stuck with sweetie bell.

and her only true friends are owloisious, spike, and trixie. thats kinda sad anyway till next chapter we wont know her decision on the matter.

>>701930701930

"considering how cruel her friends still are"

although we already know that fluttershy regrets her actions to some point (not very much though, but it's a start at least), and applejack justifies her actions by believing that this is all a test by celestia (if she stops believing that; she might turn around)

"capture twi only to protect her"

i did not think of that to be honest, i only went as far as to think she did it to ensure her own continued rule

i do agree that if she were to choose option nr 3 right away it would pretty much be absolute failure/death; hence why i think she will start out with option nr 1 (as nr 2 kinda involves traveling through hell, which feels less like "suicide" and more like begging and pleading to be brutally torn to pieces), but will over time complete either of: making peace with her eos or regain one or more of her former friends.

in the end we can't really know though, it's just as you say; we'll simply have to wait ()

Obviously, option 3 is simply a cruel joke on the part of the almighty creator.

This was definitely one of my favorite chapters from reading it on DA. I can't wait until we get to new chapters!

>>537684537684

>>537666537666

GUESS WHO  BITCHES

~The Doctor

indeed cant wait for the next chapter thistime we get to see twilight meet the twilight of this world becouse i think both are fighting their Eoses.

Celestia damn it, Twilight, you frustrating naive little bosh'tet.

im so damn happy that twi finally willingly spoke to her inner eos! i hope she doesn't end up as a prisoner in canterlot though, this mithril-at-every-possible-encounter is actually starting to become slightly annoying.

i think theres a gap in this story somewhere, first twilight succumbs to that pool of midnight then... is this story a sequel to another one or something? as i've yet to see any explanation as to twilight being a golem or this ponyville fire stuff that keeps being brought up. other than that its a good story so far.

>>721582721582

Obviously, you didn't bother to read the description, so here it is. Again.

[Please read the author's notes after the expansion before reading. Thank you] <-- The part you missed.

[Author's Note]

The following stories should be read in order to get a good grasp on references to previous works.

- Sunset (Mandatory)*

- My Little Muffin (Optional)

- Clash of the Heavenly Titans (Optional)*

- Blood is Thicker / The Reluctant Reunion of the Redoubtable Rabble-Rouser (Strongly Recommended)

All can be found on my Deviant Art account: http://ciroton.deviantart.com/

Those with * can be found here on FIMFiction.

Note: To all the biology buffs out there, I KNOW I messed up on the whole 'blood lubrication' bit and that it does not actually work that way. Why am I not changing it? Because this is a world filled with magical ponies that move clouds and make stuff float.

>>537684537684 This is the first and probably last time I will ever declare this to anyone... But your avatar pic drives me to insanity. I'm stalking you now (well.... your Fimfic account at least) >.>.... (only on tuesday-thursday and every other saturday)

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>>730693730693

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Damn Cirton you took your time with this...

When I saw the photo: "SUNSET!"

When I read the title"oh"

can anyone please explane what anime cirotons avatare is from. anyway yay update now to wate for the next one . tho is twilight really planning on going to the sorel hells cause i dont think that twi and her friends'll be able to handle the nightmare. unless ofcourse twi absorbs him then she'll have three personality's within her. i bet rainbow dash is taking her time laughing at twi also i think twi is actually going to merg with her inner deity after a bit.

>>731088731088

Kisuke Urahara. Only the most bad-ass motherfer in the anime 'Bleach'

>>731191731191 alright got it thanks for the info.

>>731191731191

It's good to know that someone watches 'Bleach' as well

question; how exactly did twi take the form of eos? first i just thought "illusion!", but then you wrote that she lied to rarity about "having used a couple of illusions learnt from trixie." the only other thing i can think is that she really did take on her alicorn appearance. only give me a definite answer if that was something i was supposed to get though; if the explanation comes up later i wanna read about it myself!

>>731191731191>>731535731535

im just sad the anime is over, i just can't bring myself to start reading the manga

>>732977732977

Eos is part of Twilight so I'm guessing that Twilight's Eos allowed Twi to become Eos... Literally!

>>733014733014

that was one of my thoughts as you can see, although i like to believe that Eos only really has a say in the matter as long as they are "separated"  in their mind. i would like to be certain though, so unless you're sure about that i would like to hear from either ciro or someone that is certain.

although, this also bring me another question i've been wondering about, is twilight stronger when in Eos form or is she basically the same all the time? maybe she can only "touch" the moon/sun when in alicorn form?

>>733107733107

Eos form is indeed stronger and the illusion thing was a lie to Rarity.

>>733232733232

okay, thx for the answer, i guess it was a little of a stupid question from my part now in hindsight, she said it wasn't an illusion herself, and if it's not an illusion it's real. should have gotten that...