Holy hell, this is a strangely interesting story. The stories of each character are very compelling and touching to read. Part of me hopes some of the future sex scenes will be more detailed, but part of me likes it the way it is. I'll be looking forward to reading more of this when it comes out.
5629877 Thank you for your comment. I can't promise any kind of update schedule, as this is a side project that will be updated whenever I get ideas for it. But more stories will come.
5630575 A story like this and you're wondering what is implied?
Simply put, you've earned a special sort of attention from me. One which does not feature trolling, but one that necessitates a far more... forensic form of analysis.
This violent type of fetishism attracts a very specific type of clientele. I've encountered it many times in the furry fandom, as well as the personalities behind it. Suffice to say, it raises my warning flags.
You are a good writer. These stories are good. I can not say anymore because I'm still in deep thought over this. Oh, and tell Quick Time to go fuck herself with a knife...repeatedly.
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Okay, now I can comment something good. This story is really intriguing as it's really well written and even makes me suspicious if you've been somewhere like this. You also have a knack at making the reader turn a blind corner, but really it's not a corner, it's a fucking chasm that leads to the darkest reaches of their mind! This story is very good at what it supposed to provide, but it's utterly horrible in a moral viewpoint. You've really made me feel hatred towards several characters and made me want to befriend others. In fact, your story could easily be ported into a talltale game. I would like you to continue but now I hate most everything IN the story. Oh, but if you're going to keep doing this emotional stuff, at least make some actual clop scenes, since I already know you're good at describing stuff.
Regretfully, I give you. 7.8/10
You did have a few predictable parts and moments where the characters acted, well, out of character.(even if they are under emotional strife)
Disturbing yet amazing. I would never kill for pleasure or fuck a kid but you've done such a great job with this story and I want to read about all these things.
I remember reading of clubs like this back in the day...
Holy hell, this is a strangely interesting story. The stories of each character are very compelling and touching to read. Part of me hopes some of the future sex scenes will be more detailed, but part of me likes it the way it is. I'll be looking forward to reading more of this when it comes out.
~SolidFire
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I'm going to save something very special for this.
You see, certain things go too far, and my typical methods do not even come close to sufficing.
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Thank you for your comment. I can't promise any kind of update schedule, as this is a side project that will be updated whenever I get ideas for it. But more stories will come.
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I find myself wondering what this comment is implying, and whether or not it is a positive or negative comment.
5630575 A story like this and you're wondering what is implied?
Simply put, you've earned a special sort of attention from me. One which does not feature trolling, but one that necessitates a far more... forensic form of analysis.
This violent type of fetishism attracts a very specific type of clientele. I've encountered it many times in the furry fandom, as well as the personalities behind it. Suffice to say, it raises my warning flags.
You are a good writer. These stories are good. I can not say anymore because I'm still in deep thought over this. Oh, and tell Quick Time to go fuck herself with a knife...repeatedly.
...
Okay, now I can comment something good.
This story is really intriguing as it's really well written and even makes me suspicious if you've been somewhere like this. You also have a knack at making the reader turn a blind corner, but really it's not a corner, it's a fucking chasm that leads to the darkest reaches of their mind! This story is very good at what it supposed to provide, but it's utterly horrible in a moral viewpoint. You've really made me feel hatred towards several characters and made me want to befriend others. In fact, your story could easily be ported into a talltale game. I would like you to continue but now I hate most everything IN the story. Oh, but if you're going to keep doing this emotional stuff, at least make some actual clop scenes, since I already know you're good at describing stuff.
Regretfully, I give you. 7.8/10
You did have a few predictable parts and moments where the characters acted, well, out of character.(even if they are under emotional strife)
Disturbing yet amazing. I would never kill for pleasure or fuck a kid but you've done such a great job with this story and I want to read about all these things.