Twilight Sparkle's Bed is on Your Bed
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It starts with a ‘krum’.
Not crumb or a krump or a krumkrumkrummykrum even the Drumstrang Seeker Viktor Krum. No, just ‘krum’ that comes from your bedroom.
You’ve never heard of a sound quite like that come from your bedroom before; in fact, you are quite sure you’ve never heard a sound that sounded like ‘krum!’ before. You didn’t even realize there was a sound that sounded like ‘krum’. They certainly hadn’t mentioned it in college during your ‘Weird Sounds You Hear In Your Bedroom’ Class. But there it was, just seconds ago, a ‘krum’. From your bedroom. How odd.
As you walk to your bedroom you begin to think of what you might find there. For most assuredly there must be something in there. What else made the ‘krum’ sound? Yes, yes you are sure that something new is in your bedroom. You’ve always wondered what it would be like to open the door to your bedroom and find something unexpected. It would add a dash of excitement and wonder to your otherwise rather dull existence! Suddenly your steps quicken and you are excited, dreaming of what might lie just beyond the door. It may be a new friend or someone offering to take you on an adventure! A wondrous one at that! Oh, you are so excited now at the thought. Who might be in your bedroom waiting for you? What fun new things might they introduce you to? You must find out, right now!
But just as quickly as the excitement comes, you slow, your steps becoming softer and more careful. It could be something bad. Something terrible. Your hand stops, lying upon the doorknob. A horrid beast could be waiting to gobble you up. A monster that will seek to end your life in the worst possible way. It could even be Little Mick Robins, the escaped gangster that they were reporting about on the news. He could be waiting for you to happily skip into your room and then, when it is too late to go back, too late to return to the safety of your living room, he will punch you and call you ‘smelly’.
That would be horrible.
“No!” you say to yourself. “I will be brave! I will face whatever is in my bedroom! I will begin to use contractions! I mean… I’ll begin using contractions!” Your shoulders square, hips thrust out, your feet turned slightly inward (you really should get a doctor to look at that), you throw open the door and march inside!
And there it is. Twilight Sparkle’s bed… on your bed. Crushing your bed, actually.
Many thoughts run through your head at the sight of this. The first is ‘I didn’t think a bed crushing another bed would make a ‘krum’ sound. A ‘baboom!’ or a ‘cracracracracrunch!’ or even a ‘fraaaamuuu!’ would be expected. But ‘krum’? That doesn’t make any sense! Beds don’t go ‘krum’.’
Your second thought is to wonder if this will ruin your chances of getting your security deposit back.
Your third thought is about how this could have happened. Never mind that somehow a large oak bed with a blue comforter (covered in suns and yellow moons… but no hearts, stars, and horseshoes, clovers and blue moons; pots of gold and rainbows and the red balloons) has just suddenly appeared and smashed your bed into little pieces. No, the more pressing question is how did a fictional character’s bed end up on your bed? Did a portal open up and drop it there? Is this some sort of forgotten plague? You don’t remember it going Locust, Frogs and Beds; that’s something you’d remember! Did the bed fairies finally answer one of your letters? No, that’s silly… you know that the last bed fairy died in captivity in 1973.
Your fourth thought is ‘Wow… that’s a really nice bed!’. And it is. Solid frame, top of the line mattress, silk sheets with a 3000 thread count!
When Princess Celestia sets up a home for her most faithful student she doesn’t skimp when it comes to the bed! It’s larger than your bed and looks much more comfortable. Truly this is a bed fit for a king… or a purple pony but they are basically equal to kings… you’re pretty sure the Pony piece in Chess moves like a king.
Your fifth thought is ‘I have a lot of thoughts’.
Your sixth is again about the word ‘krum’. Truly it was not the sound that Twilight’s bed should have made as it crushed yours. It is the type of sound that a bad author would come up with and only belatedly realize that it doesn’t work but it was too late to change now so he was forced to roll with it.
The seventh thought is one of sadness and despair. Your poor, poor bed. Here you are, so focused on the new bed that you’ve completely forgotten about the old. But there it lies, reduced to kindling. You kneel down and weep bitter tears. Your bed deserved better. It should not have ended this way. You’ve enjoyed so many good times together… it was loyal and provided you with such a wonderful rest, day in and day out, never complaining, not once! It stood there and did its duty! It was there for you when you were tired or sick or just didn’t feel like doing anything. You knew every spring and every stitch. Truly, it was the bed for you. You and it had gone through such wonderful times and as you pick up a piece of your poor broken bed you think back to all the moments you spent together Moments like the night before when you had that dream about Fluttershy wearing socks and you began to ram your-
Hmmm.
Perhaps it is good your bed is dead. Dead beds tell no tales.
You lie down on Twilight’s bed and smile. “Yes,” you say, “this will work nicely. You will be my new bed.”
And that’s when Little Mick Robins, who’d been hiding in your closet, leaps out and punches you in the stomach.
“Smelly!” he taunts, running away.
If you have seen Little Mick Robins, please contact your local police.
Well that was random.
I've seen a lot of things this morning that have simply left me with my head in my hands, contemplating my life.
I'm surprised to say that this chapter did a good job in leaving me even MORE confused than I was previously. Well played.
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*Bows* I am to please, sir.
But I'm not smelly!
...uh...hmmm....My gut reactions is...Drugs...and tree sap, lots and lots of tree sap. This has made my brain curl upon itself and cry.
You can run, but you can't hide!
The ending of this last chapter was unnecessary along with the Sweetie Belle and Harshwhinny one. It brings down thequality of the story. The rest of it is pretty interesting though.
Let us have a moment of silence for the bed fairies.
A wonderful pile of wut.
Hope you guys have fun writing these!
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This story finally reached 2 cuils.
A...krummy chapter?
I read this and...I'm surprised I still have any sanity left.
Yes.
-SYA, The Horse
It's a bed... get over it.
5476992 Depends on the bed. Rainbow Dash ate a guy's bed. Unfortunately, the bed was a VERY nice bed. That bed will be remembered. However, the bed that was crushed does not sound like a very nice bed. The bed that CRUSHED said bed sounds like an EXTREMELY nice bed. I desire said bed. Now, you bedder learn the differences bedween beds, because your current bed might end up a dead bed. And no taking beds on what will happen to your bed, be it for bedder or for worse. Do you understand now? No? Read this again.
And remember:
#bed
5476598 You flatter me ^^
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The problem with
gypsypony curses is they just don't work like that. The problem is tied to him now, not any one particular bed.Which made me think of writing a final chapter where a pony suddenly appears in his coffin.
On a Monday night, of course.
That's yet another bed down.
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I had to look up what a Cuil was.
only on the internet...
Is it weird that I read this chapter in the Narrator's voice from The Stanley Parable?
Also, I'm pretty sure that "krum" is one of the sounds the TARDIS makes in the presence of danger.
Keep going! ;)
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I wrote this with a British accent in mind for the narrator... perhaps someone like John Cleese. It definitely has a Python feel.
Hah!
Give me a horse any time. The King may be able to move to all directions freely, but he moves like the little fat sack of grease he probably is! And he has this annoying tendency to get captured by enemy pieces all the time! I swear, it happens in practically every single game. He's worse than Princess Peach.
lol.
All my wat
5478730 Your profile picture scared the shit out of me.
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5478845 I actually read a lot of the 3rd person stories on this site exactly like The Stanley Parable Narrator. It just fits so well.
I quickly recover from being punched, grab a nearby Shillelagh and proceed to beat the tripe out of the little turd.
I then climb into my new bed and dream pony dreams.
So, we're all just going to ignore that little part about Futtershy and socks? Ok then
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Oh, we're not ignoring it.
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We're redacted
together.