At first it was just another party, but this one was always going to be special. The first chance to celebrate the anniversary of the original sonic rainboom and Pinkie was going to pull out all the stops.
But when Twilight questions how Pinkie could possibly do the things she does and begins to piece things together, she finally gets an answer. As she does, she realises that sometimes it's important to never lose sight of the pony you are.
Note - this is my first fanfic and hopefully at least someone will enjoy it. No idea if and when I'll right more, but constructive criticism is always welcome. Rated teen just for the brief allusion to alcohol.
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This was acctually good. You deserve a +1
Very much well-written for a first try
I could see this. It even makes some sense.
An inborn ability to manipulate universal elements and laws? Seems legit. I've seen stranger things. Very good for a first try, if what you say is the truth. Much better than mine, in my opinion.
Did anyone else think of Daniel X while reading this? If you haven't read the series, there is an alien boy sent to earth that has the same power described by pinkie. it's a very good series of books by James Paterson.
Omnipotence is a heavy burden. Certainly not one you'd expect to be so responsibly shouldered by Pinkie Pie. Then you remember that there's a tiny bit of sanity holding together the cotton candy of her brain, a desperate drop of rationality that needs the happiness and approval of others to keep going...
Well done. Simple, but deep.
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That cat's adorable :3 In any case, there's no shipping because my sister despises shipping, and this story was partially for her.
As to the lack of reaction from Twilight... well, if I had a friend, who's just spilt her heart out to me, even with the kind of secret she did, I wouldn't be saying a lot either. What is there to say? She can hardly talk about how cool it is, because she realises what a burden it is to Pinkie. So I mean, as I was writing it, I felt that it was a case of silence, acceptance and support being the most realistic reaction. Sure, maybe they'd deal with it in the morning and talk it through, but there and then, in the moment, there didn't seem a lot to say. A case perhaps of my writing ability being hindered by my own personality and lack of imagination, but it's a very fair comment you make that maybe Twilight should have shown a little more reaction.
Thank you to everyone who's commented.
I realise it's hardly the greatest piece of fanfic the world has ever seen, but if just one person enjoyed it then I've done better than I expected. Maybe I'll have to sit down and write more in the future... 
Liked this story and seeing Pinkie admit her true powers. hehe
Considering Pinkie Pie is in a fictional world and apparently has some degree of fourth wall awareness.....it makes sense she'd have access to the writers' powers.
Really interesting and good story! I do wish you expanded more on it though, it has a lot of potential.
Also, Twilight seemed really out of character at the ending....in character for all of it except for the reveal.