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Shadow

Shadows are dark shapes; nightmares and bad dreams. Pinkamena's whole seems like a shadow, but she might never wake up from this bad dream.

This is my first fanfic, so criticism and feedback is more then welcomed. Also, I'm looking for a proofreader, so if you're interested, please pm me.
Thank you for reading my story!!
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luftschl0ss

luftschl0ss #1 · Dec 25th, 2014 · · · Prelude ·

Ooh! I like it so far! You may be interested in making the chapters slightly longer if you have time, but I'm sensing a good story line here, one that I haven't seen before. I will track with interest.

MysticPegasister

MysticPegasister #2 · Dec 25th, 2014 · · · Chapter One ·

5424177 In the future, the chapters will definitely be longer. I was just nervous about posting my first Fanfic, so I made the Prelude and the first chapter a little short to see how people would react to the story line. Anyway, thanks for your feedback

luftschl0ss

luftschl0ss #3 · Dec 26th, 2014 · · · Chapter One ·

No problem! I just wrote my first one too (it's being uploaded right now) and I read it myself and I was like, "I wrote that?!" I had to resubmit it like three times XD