Joey and his brothers bought items from a merchant at a convention and ended up getting sent to an alternate world of Equestria. Getting betrayed and trapped for a 1000 years, Joey plans to find his brothers, and do battle against the betrayer. Read
It got kinda repetitive when you started listing everything that the Merchant had on display. I honestly skipped to the end of the listing after the second or third paragraph. Other than that I enjoyed this chapter quite a bit, can't wait for the next update.
Damn, this story has LoTS of crossovers. Anyway, it seems like a good one.
I literally am unable to take this story seriously just by seeing that name. Was that really the best name you could come up with?
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It's what my brother's call me at times, and it isn't exactly original since the name had been used by others. But I like it.
So then, what is wrong with it?
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It's silly, I can't take it seriously. This story isn't tagged as Comedy, and yet the protag's name is hilarious.
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The name may seem silly to others, and some don't see it as a funny name. Everyone has their likes and dislikes after all.
Lots of cross overs but will be gald to see what happens keep up the good work pal, I look forward to seeing more discord fun time
this seems good so far ^_^ i like that this chapter is super long :D
It got kinda repetitive when you started listing everything that the Merchant had on display. I honestly skipped to the end of the listing after the second or third paragraph. Other than that I enjoyed this chapter quite a bit, can't wait for the next update.
I'm looking forward to when Luna finds out what Celestia did