A Tail of Difference.
written by SaiyanUltima
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This story looks interesting. I'll fav it and hope the next chapter comes soon.
it has potential keep up the good work
it has potential keep up the good work
it has potential keep up the good work
it has potential keep up the good work
it has potential keep up the good work
it has potential keep up the good work
it has potential keep up the good work
it has potential keep up the good work
it has potential keep up the good work
it has potential keep up the good work
i love foxes!!
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sooooo cute!!!!!!
I swear I've heard an idea about celestia taking in a child like this before...was it a blog or thread?
Love it, now just put a description of what he looks so we get a clear picture, if you don't mind
Oh and another thing KAWAII
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I'm still going to read this, but the main character of a story is called the protagonist, antagonists are opponents that create conflict.
Protagonist. Of course if you don't want made fox evil.
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Oh, did I mess up?
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Hmm...I don't think this is cute
*nose grows*
Okay its some-what cute
*nose continues to grow*
FINE! It's cuter than a puppy and tiny kitten wrestling in a small shoe!
Tails and ears!?? Nope getting the hell out of here.
How many tails dose Leo have? I don't remember it being said.
I'm...confused.
So, I am going to keep readin' until I'm not anymore.
5495249 Ok...let seee...Leo is a human or...Half human half....???? oh god my head is gonna kill me.
Some kind a furry!? IT HAVA A TINY CLAW? oh my god. HE WAS A FOX? MISTER FOX!?
So...is he like a kitsune or something?
So he's half human half fox?
He's a Kitsune? The rare male Kitsune?
5403686 Wut? You said that like 6 times there.
5413133 actually atagoniat just means the bad guy in the story if the protogonist is a criminal g in there wolrd the the antagonist would be like the head cop pr aomething its just the villion of the story
gamer...and a molester? I don't see the point of this comment. It really takes away from the story. These are just funny alternate characterizations that the fanbase has attributed to these 2 characters. If you're going to REALLY put it in your story that one of the two sisters is a molester, you'd probably need to include some info as to why the hell she isn't in jail or banished or something.
Unless I am really missing something. It's just a turnoff to see such an off-the-cuff meta (if that's the right term) comment in the middle of a story. I'm going to keep reading just to see if the first chapter can be redeemed, but I'm not optimistic.
I find it heavily amusing that I started reading this on the first day of Spring. Perhaps it's a sign.
*walks in with a couple minor injuries* well i had a nice little “chat” with the spirit council and let just say the new one will whistle a different tune since the old one kinda disagreed my attempt to stop their power moment don’t believe me then maybe *pulls out a gem that is in a band of metal that the metal has special rune markings on it* this special prison their in can help prove and since they attacked first by dimension law artical 335-beta 3qyz if attempt of attacking a ambassador of a dimension (such as me for example) no matter what rank they are (which is the old spirit council) then the party who did the attack shall be forever stripped their title and seat of power allowing the ambassador full access to defend himself anyway he/she wants says so here *pulls out a big book with a title in bold “dimensional laws and rules vol 1” on it* and this is one of the limited edition original copy's that has a enchantment to prevent someone changing what is said there
If the first chapter/part doesn't grip me with some interest at least, then I don't think a story is for me personally. I guess it's cute to some degree, but it's not that great, IMO. No like but also no dislike.
It just feels meh to me.
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Everyone has different tastes. No hate here.