6109234 Not to spoil anything, but you can be assured that Amity will be coming out of her shell a bit more in future. This is still VERY early in the story, which is for the most part already mapped out in my head. She's going to shine through, don't worry.
As for Charlotte, I almost feel like she developed her own personality all by herself. The words fell onto paper as though they were simply meant to be that way, and I haven't the slightest intention to change it, haha. You'll get to know a bit more about her background down the road.
Also, don't worry about feeling like you'd make me change anything. I can kinda tell where certain parts of the story are a bit weak, so I'm always open to advice and opinions. But I know what direction overall the story has to take, so I like to take advice where it is needed and always think on or consider the ones that may not before working forward. If nothing else, those things may help me down the road. I strive to better my work every single time I write. So please, always comment what you think, even if you hated it. I want to be better.
As for Chapter 4 (what was previously chapter 2) it is still in the works, and isn't even finished let alone edited. It may be a while before I get anything more posted, so hang in there. I hope to have it posted before the end of the month if editing allows it though. But that's just the initial goal, we'll see how things turn out. Thanks again!!
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Not to spoil anything, but you can be assured that Amity will be coming out of her shell a bit more in future. This is still VERY early in the story, which is for the most part already mapped out in my head. She's going to shine through, don't worry.
As for Charlotte, I almost feel like she developed her own personality all by herself. The words fell onto paper as though they were simply meant to be that way, and I haven't the slightest intention to change it, haha. You'll get to know a bit more about her background down the road.
Also, don't worry about feeling like you'd make me change anything. I can kinda tell where certain parts of the story are a bit weak, so I'm always open to advice and opinions. But I know what direction overall the story has to take, so I like to take advice where it is needed and always think on or consider the ones that may not before working forward. If nothing else, those things may help me down the road. I strive to better my work every single time I write. So please, always comment what you think, even if you hated it. I want to be better.
As for Chapter 4 (what was previously chapter 2) it is still in the works, and isn't even finished let alone edited. It may be a while before I get anything more posted, so hang in there. I hope to have it posted before the end of the month if editing allows it though. But that's just the initial goal, we'll see how things turn out. Thanks again!!